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INTERVIEW: Kirsten Beyer on “Protectors”

We last checked in with Star Trek: Voyager scribe Kirsten Beyer back in August, where we covered her entire Voyager journey up to that point — now our she’s back, speaking to us about her new novel, “Protectors.”

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TrekCore: First of all, congratulations on making the New York Times Bestseller List! Excellent news, and very well-deserved!

Kirsten Beyer: Thank you, and it is very kind of you to say that it is well-deserved.  That part is harder to take in. For now, I’m just happy that it happened. It wasn’t something I expected. I was relieved that I didn’t break the streak Trek books have been on lately. I think the solid work so many authors have done for several years now is finally starting to be recognized and I’m delighted to be a part of that.

TrekCore: One of the things you excel at is mining the rich history of Trek for story ideas to continue or expand upon. For example, Protectors follows up on what I consider to be a very mundane episode of Voyager, “Twisted,” and crafts an amazing and compelling story from it. What can you share about your process of choosing what episodes or events you want to explore further?

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Kirsten Beyer: It’s tricky. My instinct, despite all of the evidence to the contrary, is to avoid looking back as much as possible. I know readers are curious about species Voyager encountered in the past and enjoy interesting follow-ups.

But it is way too easy to simply say, “Gee, I wonder what the (insert alien of the week) are up to now?” and build a story around it. For me to be willing to go back there has to be a really good reason to do so.

In the case of Janeway, sorting out “Endgame” felt mandatory. It was such a troubling episode on so many levels, and the events of Destiny were directly linked to it, so addressing how it would affect the character when she returned was not optional.

It also became a great point of focus through which to explore many of the inconsistencies that were written into the character over the years, so I wasn’t bothered by the need to go there.

The issue of Riley’s people (from “Unity”) was also a no-brainer because of the actions of the Caeliar, and the fact that part of the fleet’s stated mission is to search for former Borg or Caeliar in the Delta Quadrant.  Chakotay rightly ordered them to follow up on Riley as soon as he was free to do so. If the Caeliar transformation had never happened, it would be hard to justify revisiting those characters again just because it might be interesting. There always has to be an in-story reason to go anywhere.

Riley’s people made sense in terms of the broader mission as well as thematically. Eternal Tide was as much about family as anything else and even had they not procreated as they did, they remain a part of Seven’s “extended” family for better or worse.  Axum was a similar problem, so we find him again in Protectors. Had it not been for the creation of the catomic plague, I might have waited a bit longer to deal with Axum, but a story that dealt with him in one way or another has always seemed inevitable to me.

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When it came to “Twisted,” it was truly one of the last places I thought to search for the hook I needed. But I had never gotten over all of that data that was dumped into Voyager’s computers and then never addressed again. That made it easy to choose. Everything else about the episode made it less appealing.

But as you will see when the story continues through the next two books, this was never really about solving the mystery of all that data so I could fill in a blank. The core story of this entire trilogy began when I decided to create The Worlds of the First Quadrant. Working backward from there, I needed a way to get Voyager close to their territory, but not right in the middle of it at first.

I needed to introduce them without just dropping out of warp and discovering them so that the crew would begin the first contact part of the mission with some preconceived notions that would become obstacles. And whatever episode I chose needed to give me enough room to make later story connections that won’t be apparent until the whole story is told.  It needed to be just vague enough, if that makes sense, so I could really connect it in a way that would surprise readers without feeling forced.

That’s how “Twisted” got woven into this story, and truly how any past story gets called up again. I have to need it badly enough to overcome my inherent disdain for re-treading old ground.

TrekCore: The fact that Janeway doesn’t immediately take up her position with the fleet was a welcome development, and the counseling she has to undergo feels very realistic. Unlike the Voyager television series, the giant “reset button” is never hit. Would you say you are generally averse to the reset button? What is the most satisfying part of exploring the “fallout” of tragic or life-changing events in the lives of your characters?

Kirsten Beyer: For me, the “reset button” is the laziest form of storytelling imaginable. I could never create a story that relied upon such a reset for resolution. It’s just cheating. I will never forget “Year of Hell.” By the time that story aired, I had already starting pitching stories to Voyager’s producers and one of them had been telling me about this concept they were working on…this “Year of Hell” that would strip the ship down to its bare bones.

I was all for it. I was expecting it to last an entire season, which was one of the early discussions. Instead, it was fabulous episode right up until the end.

I just don’t think it’s fair to take an audience on a journey no one but the audience will ever remember. I’m going to ask for an exception to that rule in the case of “Course: Oblivion,” which I thought was a really interesting follow-up to one of the worst Voyager episodes ever (“Demon”). Even though our crew never learned of it, it was a story worth telling. It has always kind of haunted me, like a lot of Bryan Fuller’s work.

But, the point of accumulating experiences, especially painful ones, is to learn from them. The crew learned nothing from “Year of Hell.” The whole thing just made me sad because the writers did it to themselves. They had no business going as far as they did if they didn’t have a better resolution in their pocket.

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When things happen in my stories, they always happen for a reason, and that reason rarely has anything to do with how cool I can make a plot.  I just won’t accept anything less from myself because I don’t think it’s fair to waste people’s time and I don’t think the readers, who only get one or maybe two stories a year from us in the books, would ever let something like that slide now. They deserve better.

One of the criticisms I heard often about Eternal Tide was that it made all of the suffering the characters had endured when Janeway died meaningless. I respectfully disagree. There were many ways I could have told that story that would have rendered the past meaningless. I consciously went out of my way as I created it to make sure that nothing was lost, beyond the ships and characters that died in Omega.

I always intended to use the events of that story to propel all of the characters forward in a new direction. It’s only satisfying to me if I can create a story that will honor the past while making room to integrate it into the lives of the characters the next time we see them.

By far the most rewarding part of refusing to ignore anything that has gone before, however, is that fact that when you use it, you have conflict already baked into the cake and conflict is essential to story and character development.

TrekCore: Where there any particular inspirations for Janeway’s journey in this novel?

Kirsten Beyer: Beyond recognizing that she was going to need to spend some time living with all that had just happened to her before she resume anything resembling a “normal” schedule, not really.  My instinct as I was developing the new trilogy was to keep her off-stage for as much of the first book as I could.

Although she was by no means the sum total of Eternal Tide, that was definitely her story as much as anyone else’s. I wanted to shift the focus off that for a bit. I needed to reconstitute the fleet and to keep them looking forward rather than back. But each time I considered what I needed to do with Janeway, the story kept getting bigger.  And once I had found the heart of it, the discussion with Counselor Austen, I knew it was okay that her story took more time to tell than I had planned.

I think a lot of readers needed to see her face all of the consequences of her past actions in order to feel like she deserved our trust again as commander of the fleet. Certainly there are some who will follow her anywhere. But for me to feel complete peace about that, we had to see it happen right in front of us. So we did.

TrekCore: Several plot threads are left unresolved at the end of Protectors. In some cases, it looks like dark times are ahead for a few of our characters, in particular Tom and B’Elanna, and Seven and Axum, not to mention The Doctor and the heart-wrenching decision he made with regards to his programming. What are the benefits of taking characters to the darker places, and how do you know how they will respond? When you write the characters, do you find yourself dictating where they go, or is it a more organic process with the characters informing you of where they are headed?

Kirsten Beyer: I create the obstacles the characters will face very consciously. Every character is where they are when a story begins and I always have a pretty good handle on that these days, since I’ve had them all to myself for so many years now.  I tend to craft the challenges that are coming with an eye toward exploring the next relevant facet of a character that interests me, but I never get to completely control how it all turns out. Which sounds weird, I’m sure. I mean, I’m writing it, so if I’m not deciding, who is?

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There have just been too many times in the writing of these books when I have planned for something to happen and as I was writing it, something else occurred to me that felt better and more organic.  Often times, it complicated my life considerably, but I have learned to trust it when this happens. I was trained as an actor so when I am writing these characters, I am actually playing them from their point of view in any given scene. I never had any patience for actors who would come to a moment during a scene and say, “But my character would never do that.” They did. It’s right there on the page. So please figure it out so we can all get on with our lives, was always my reaction to that kind of thing.

Now that I’m the one in control, I understand the challenge of this a lot better. It is always crystal clear to me in writing any scene when I am trying to impose something I need for plot on my characters. Inevitably, I get to that point, and just can’t write what I had planned.  It sucks. But it’s true. In some dark subconscious realm where all of these stories are growing inside me, these are real people.

When they refuse to do something I’m asking, a big red flag goes up and I just stop. That is the moment in the creative process when it is appropriate for the character to raise their hand and say, “But my character would never do that.” I hate it when they are right, but the always are. So I always listen.

TrekCore: October will see the release of the next novel in the Voyager series, Acts of Contrition. Are there any hints or sneak peeks you can provide us about that novel?

Kirsten Beyer: Probably not many that those who have already read Protectors can’t see coming. We’re going deep into the Worlds of the First Quadrant. If you know me at all, you should probably assume that’s not going to go terribly smoothly.  We’re also going to continue to explore the catomic plague, and of course, Seven’s reunion with Axum.  Doctor Sharak gets more development and a familiar face for Voyager fans who we haven’t see much of in the relaunch helps with that.

For Acts of Contrition, I decided to try my hand at writing the first actual scene ever written almost completely in Tamarian in any of the books. I sort of like how it turned out, so I hope others will too.  Tom Paris will face his mother in mediation and that story will be resolved…mostly. And yes, we will learn more about the alliances being formed in the Delta Quadrant between former enemies that seem determined to undermine the fleet.

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There’s a lot going on. One of the most consistent complaints I’m seeing about Protectors is that it felt too much like a set-up for another story. It was. I hope folks will be more understanding when they see how much more there is to come and how it all builds from what began in Protectors and is ultimately resolved in the final book.

TrekCore: You have mentioned that Protectors and Acts of Contrition make up the first two parts of a trilogy. Can you provide any hints about what we will see in this trilogy, as well as maybe where you see the series going after the three books are released?

Kirsten Beyer: The working title for the final volume of the trilogy, which I am writing at the moment, is Atonement. That’s not final, so don’t be upset with me if it changes at some point in the future.  Since the day it came to me, I have been unable to think of it as “Atonement” in the sense of making up for some past sin, because that has never been the point. I always hear it broken up in my head as “At-one-ment.”

Obviously that’s not a real word, but it comes closer in my mind to all of the themes I’ve been toying with for the past year now, which is why I can’t let that title go. For me, this whole story has been about bringing conflicting, even irreconcilable points of view into alignment with one another; to find a way to work going forward that honors each person’s values and where they came from, without losing our own identity in the process or sacrificing our own sense of what is right.

This story, like so many stories I tell, started with something that has nothing to do with Trek that bothers me deeply. Exploring it here has helped me sort through some of my own struggles with the issues that divide me from others I care deeply about.  I didn’t have a good answer when I started the project. I do now, which is nice for me, and the telling of this story is what helped me find it.

I don’t know if all of that will be clear on the page when the story is finished. But I’ve done what I can to unearth it for myself and my readers.

On a more practical level, this trilogy serves as the end point for the fleet’s first year in the Delta Quadrant. All of the story threads that have been unresolved up until this point will be completed, leaving us with pretty much a blank slate going forward, which is simultaneously thrilling and terrifying from where I’m sitting.

After that, I have no idea. Okay, I have a few ideas, but none that are well-formed enough for me to share anything about them. What I do know, is that I will be addressing them as soon as I am done with Atonement, because I have already been asked to continue carrying the story forward once this trilogy is done. The paperwork is not final, so as always, that could change. But that is the plan right now.

TrekCore: In our last interview, you mentioned a work of original fiction you were working on. What more can you tell us about that project?

Kirsten Beyer: It has sat, untouched, for the past year and will sadly continue to be neglected in the coming year. The commitments I have made to continue writing Voyager mean that it will be at least this time next year before I will be free to go back to it.   It’s frustrating. I have truly hoped to find a way to work on it while  continuing on with Voyager, but there simply aren’t enough hours in the day.

TrekCore: Thank you so much for providing your insights into Protectors and the Voyager relaunch! We’re all looking forward to checking out Acts of Contrition in the fall!

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REVIEW: “Star Trek: Voyager — Protectors”

protectors-coverStar Trek: Voyager
Protectors
By Kirsten Beyer
Release Date: January 28, 2014
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From the back cover:

Following the destruction of four fleet vessels at the hands of the Omega Continuum, the U.S.S. Voyager and U.S.S. Demeter set course for a region of the Delta Quadrant far beyond anything previously explored. Captain Chakotay is determined to prove to Starfleet Command that the fleet’s ongoing mission is vital to Federation interests…and the key to doing so may lie in a distress call Voyager received nine years earlier, but could not investigate.

Meanwhile, Vice Admiral Kathryn Janeway is recalled to the Alpha Quadrant for an evaluation period to determine her next assignment. Given the trauma she has recently endured, Admiral Akaar, Starfleet’s Commander-in-Chief, questions Janeway’s fitness to command the fleet. Janeway’s primary concern remains the fleet’s safety. For their mission to continue, she must find a way to secure the resources they require. But the uncertainty of her superior officers has left her powerless to act in their best interests…

My thoughts:

One of the highlights of Trek Lit in recent years has been the excellent novels of the Voyager relaunch series, helmed by Kirsten Beyer. Her first three — Full Circle, Unworthy, and Children of the Storm — were some of my favorite novels. The most recent entry, last year’s The Eternal Tide, didn’t quite rise to the level of the previous books, but was still very enjoyable and an excellent entry in the series. So, how does this month’s new release compare?

In many ways, Protectors seems like a bit of a return to the style of Children of the Storm. If you read my review of that novel, you know that I was HUGELY impressed by it. The tone and style of Protectors seems to be modeled on that earlier work. Back once again is that Star Trek ideal of seeking out new life and adding to the sum of our knowledge.

One thing  Protectors showcased was Kirsten Beyer’s impressive ability to take what is the very definition of a “meh” episode and craft an utterly fascinating tale from it — in this case, calling back to Season Two’s “Twisted,” in which the structure of Voyager is warped such that no one can find their way to critical areas of the ship. In the end, the anomaly that causes this effect leaves without explanation after having dumped a huge amount of data into Voyager’s computers.

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This data is never mentioned again. In the A-plot of the Protectors, Captain Chakotay leads the Voyager and Demeter to the area of space near where Voyager first encountered the anomaly. Lieutenant Kim, having pieced together some of the information that was uploaded to Voyager’s computer, believes that the initial contact was in fact a distress call. They hope to make contact with the “waveform” anomalies to find out how they can assist.

Kathryn Janeway is recalled by Starfleet, who wish to evaluate her condition following her rather unorthodox resurrection. Meanwhile, in the Beta Quadrant, a frontier outpost makes a shocking discovery: a former Borg drone who did not join the Caeliar Gestalt. This person turns out to be Axum, Seven of Nine’s former “acquaintance” from “Unimatrix Zero.”

More than anything else, Protectors is a character study. Kathryn Janeway is completely deconstructed in her counseling sessions and must build herself back up again. Kirsten Beyer shows incredible aplomb in handling her character in particular. As someone who was never really a Voyager fan, and a Janeway fan even less-so, the fact that Beyer made me truly care and appreciate this character is astounding.

axumAxum — Seven of Nine’s long-distance lover — returns from “Unimatrix Zero.”

Other characters are handled perfectly by Beyer as well. The Doctor stands out in particular, so when his reactions to Seven aren’t what we expect, it comes across as all the more strange because he is written so closely to how he was portrayed in the series. From the heart-wrenching decision that the Doctor made about his programming to the heartbreak and rash decisions made by Julia Paris, Tom Paris’s mother, every character great and small has their moment. Even the description of Axum’s torture by the Borg Queen was absolutely heart-wrenching and horrible.

I love that Kirsten Beyer is so averse to using the dreaded “reset button” that was such a hallmark of the Voyager television series. Rather than glossing over what happened previously and returning to business as usual, Janeway and company must face the fallout from the events of the previous novels. This is very refreshing in a universe that has, in the past, used the reset button an alarming number of times.

Final thoughts:

Protectors was a truly great read. The high point of the Voyager relaunch is, for me, still Children of the Storm, but Protectors comes very close to reaching that level as well. The plot points left hanging are very enticing, and I can’t wait to find out more about the Paris family situation as well as learn more about The Worlds of the First Quadrant in the next installment!

An absolutely excellent and enthralling story that returns to what I love about the Voyager relaunch. A scientific mystery combined with seeking out new life and new civilizations. Mix equal parts character study. Stir in excellent writing, and add genuinely emotional moments to taste. Perfect!

– Reviewed by Literature Editor Dan Gunther

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Star Trek: The Next Generation Season 6 Blu-ray Trailer Debuts!

The wait is over! We’ve got a special treat for everyone today – CBS has just released the very first look at Star Trek: The Next Generation – Season 6 on Blu-ray, coming this June!

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The trailer cleverly brings together several common themes from TNG’s sixth season and can roughly be divided into three sections – “Legends“, “History” and “Inner Demons“.

The majority of fans will undoubtedly be thrilled by the long awaited debut of space station Deep Space Nine in the “Legends” strand, complete with a nice look at Dr. Bashir in high definition (“Birthright“). “History” is no less potent, with a whimsical look at some of TNG Season 6’s most memorable period pieces including “A Fistful of Datas” and “Ship in a Bottle“.

Finally, things take a turn for the serious with “Inner Demons” as we’re treated to a look at the hard-hitting episodes “Chain of Command” and “Frame of Mind“. Topping off the trailer, the VAM preview holds a bit of a surprise this season with a special look at a rather unique deleted scene – the long-since rumored Scotty/Troi encounter!

To wrap up this initial look at Season 6, here’s a closer glimpse at the Season Six cover art, featuring Picard, La Forge, and Crusher (the same trio from the Season 3 cover), on a rather striking purple background.

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We’ve got a whole lot more analysis and commentary on the trailer coming over the next couple of weeks, including full 1080p HD screenshots (for those of you who will undoubtedly want a Deep Space Nine-themed wallpaper), SD/HD comparisons and more information on the bonus features. Naturally, as soon as pre-orders for the new Blu-ray set become available, we’ll make sure you all know about it.

So, what do you think of Season Six’s new look – was this trailer worth the wait? Sound off in the comments below!

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TNG “Chain of Command” Blu-ray: New HD Trailer

Following hot on the heels of the newly released trailer for Star Trek: The Next Generation – Season 6 on Blu-ray, CBS have given us more HD Trek to marvel at with a special preview of the single-disc release of TNG’s “Chain of Command”. The release is set to feature both parts of the hard-hitting episode edited together in a feature-length presentation with some exclusive bonus material including an audio commentary and documentary. Like Season 6, we’re expecting “Chain of Command” to hit shelves around June.

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“Chain of Command” has always been one of TNG’s best two-parters, albeit excelling in different areas to classics such as “The Best of Both Worlds”. The trailer is intense in every way, skillfully communicating the high stakes of Picard’s mission and the dire straits he finds himself in at the hands of the cruel Gul Madred.

There’s a nice preview of the bonus material, including a hint at a new deleted scene, one of several removed from the final cut of the episode. For the first time we can see Data and Jellico discussing the Federation’s defense plans for Minos Korva, the very thing we see Gul Madred ask Picard about in the episodes’ torture scenes! Jellico reveals that he only received the plans himself that day, so Picard never saw them… meaning that Picard will never be able to answer Madred’s questions about Starfleet’s plans.

Much like Season 6, watch out for a host of articles featuring commentary, analysis, HD screencaps and downloads from “Chain of Command” in the coming weeks.

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Here’s a closer look at the Chain of Command cover art, featuring an emotionally wrecked Picard with the cold calculating stare of Gul Madred, separated by a motif which incorporates the same design as Madred’s office-come-torture chamber.

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Be sure to let us know what you think about the new trailer in the comments below as well as the quality of remastering on display.

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A Look Back at “Star Trek: The Fall”

The last half of the year in Trek literature was dominated by The Fall, a five-book epic series dealing with a major tragedy and an existential threat to the United Federation of Planets. With the release of the final book in the series, Peaceable Kingdoms, The Fall has now come to an end.

Now that the dust has settled, how does the series as a whole stack up? And, possibly more importantly, where do we go from here?

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Wrapping Up 2013’s Epic Crossover Series

By Literature Editor Dan Gunther

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Revelation and Dust by David R. George III
In my initial review of this novel, I speculated that the major story-line of the novel would be picked up again in the rest of The Fall.

Now that the series has concluded, it is apparent that that is not the case. It would seem that the Kira/Keev story is a setup for further novels in the Deep Space Nine series. While this is welcome news and I’m excited to read them, it is a little disappointing that the main narrative of this novel is so disconnected from the overall Fall arc.

Still, it is a lovely story that left me wanting more. The “big event” of the assassination of President Bacco kicks off a great story that has far-reaching repercussions for the Federation and our characters.

I only wish that the cliffhanger ending was picked up on or at the very least mentioned in further stories in The Fall.

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The Crimson Shadow by Una McCormack
Quite possibly one of the best Trek novels ever written, and certainly the best novel this year, I’ve made my love of The Crimson Shadow very clear.

Una McCormack’s story about the politics and society of Cardassia is both beautiful and disturbing. As usual, her writing of Garak is pitch-perfect and a true pleasure to read. Her original characters are also dynamic and fully fleshed-out.

The revelations uncovered by Picard and Garak about the true perpetrators of Bacco’s assassination are shocking, and the outcomes of this discovery will be felt throughout the series.

Like Revelation and Dust, The Crimson Shadow tells its own story, but it contrasts the previous novel by integrating that story more fully into The Fall.

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A Ceremony of Losses by David Mack
It may be a tired joke, but David Mack’s reputation as “The Angel of Death” is well-earned.

His Destiny trilogy featured casualties on a galactic scale and changed the face of the Federation forever. So, it is ironic that his latest novel features the saving of an entire species from extinction.

In A Ceremony of Losses, we see Dr. Julian Bashir’s attempt to complete the work started by Andorian scientists to prevent the extinction of that species from a reproductive crisis that came to light over ten years ago in the Trek lit universe.

We learn more about the hawkish President pro tempore, Bajoran Ishan Anjar. This book sets us up for the final thrust of the final two books in The Fall

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The Poisoned Chalice by James Swallow
Giving Una McCormack’s book a pretty good run for its money is The Poisoned Chalice by James Swallow.

I was very impressed with this novel. Swallow shows a definite love of black ops/shadow intrigue with the penultimate entry in The Fall.

The characterizations of Tuvok, Nog, and the rest of the covert team featured in this book were terrific, and the plot featured enough twists and turns to keep me guessing the entire time.

The actions of Ishan Anjar’s administration show a callous disregard for the ideals of the Federation, instead sacrificing those ideals for safety, security, and a good showing at the polls. The stage is set for a great debate between the warhawks and the doves.

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Peaceable Kingdoms by Dayton Ward
The final entry in The Fall, Peaceable Kingdoms had a lot to live up to. The previous three novels set the bar extremely high. Unfortunately, this is where the series stumbled just a bit. Gone is the nuanced face-off between two opposing viewpoints.

Instead of having an antagonist whose views don’t jibe with our heroes’, we get a usurper who has no legitimate claim to his position. While the story that Peaceable Kingdoms tells isn’t necessarily a bad one, it is unfortunate that we didn’t get a deeper examination of the issues.

This is not to say that this story isn’t enjoyable. Anyone who doubts Dayton Ward’s ability to craft wonderful prose needs to re-read the scene in which Attorney General Phillipa Louvois brings the charges against the President pro tem to the floor of the Federation council.

The Series as a Whole:

The Fall succeeded on a number of levels. I feel as though the middle three novels did an excellent job setting up a showdown between two opposing ideologies. Essentially, the Federation has faced another existential crisis. Unlike the Borg invasion of Destiny, however, the threat has not come from an external force, but from within. The Federation was founded on the ideals of peaceful cooperation, mutual respect, and the idea that we are better off together than apart. On one side, the warhawks, who believe in greater security and force to protect the people of the Federation. On the other side, the traditionalists, who believe that a Federation that ignores the ideals upon which it was built is not worth protecting. Where the series falls apart is in not taking that argument to its conclusion, and instead forestalling any meaningful debate on the issue.

The Fall has had a profound impact on the Star Trek lit-verse. Not as huge an impact as the Destiny trilogy did a few years ago, mind you, but a sizeable one nonetheless. Nanietta Bacco, a well-loved and respected character, has had her story come to an end. Her legacy is a period in which the Federation faced a multitude of crises, but still came through in the end mostly intact. She was an excellent character and will be sorely missed.

baccoPresident Nan Bacco’s tenure came to an unexpected end in The Fall.

In addition, the Andorian reproductive crisis, a story that has been with us for over a decade (has it really been that long?), has been resolved. When a story-line has been running that long, the fear is that it may be abandoned before coming to a satisfying conclusion. Thankfully, this did not happen.

Where do we go from here?

While wrapping up the main story, The Fall has left a number of plot threads dangling. Obviously, the cliffhanger from Revelation and Dust must be dealt with, and we can only hope that David R. George III has a book in the works that continues that story. But beyond that, we don’t know the ultimate fate of Julian Bashir, Starfleet officer turned renegade. We know that he is planning to go after Section 31, and one can only assume that his story is continued in Section 31: Disavowed by David Mack, scheduled for release towards the end of this year.

One question that has me curious: what of William Riker? In The Poisoned Chalice, he is promoted by Fleet Admiral Akaar to the rank of Admiral, and is no longer captain of the Titan. Will that promotion stick? And what of the Titan series? Will it continue with the Titan acting as Riker’s flagship? Or will it be commanded by Christine Vale? Or, heaven forbid, will the Titan series end?

We may have our answer in February, as a Titan e-book exclusive will be released: Absent Enemies by Trek newcomer John Jackson Miller. I recently read one of his Star Wars novels, Kenobi, and really enjoyed it. I’m excited to see him tackle Trek, as well as to learn the ultimate fate of Riker and the Titan.

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What of Riker and the Titan?

Finally, the end of the miniseries sees new orders issued to Picard and the Enterprise. It seems that Starfleet and the new Federation president are interested in seeing a new thrust of exploration. Admiral Akaar speaks of pushing the boundaries of Federation exploration and multi-year missions in the vein of Captain Kirk’s historic “five-year mission.”

I can’t help but wonder if this represents a kind of sea change in the tone and style of the novels set in the 24th century. The past few years have been marked by political stories and existential crises for the Federation. Perhaps the overall style of the novels will change from this point forward. Only time will tell, I suppose.

The Fall is far superior to earlier attempts at crossover stories, such as Gateways. I much prefer crossovers such as this one or Destiny, in which the action is much more integrated between the series and the stories have more of an impact on each other. For the most part, The Fall works.

There are a few stumbles along the way, and I feel that the conclusion could have been stronger, but in the end I believe the Trek universe is better for having told this story.

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EXCLUSIVE! ‘Into Darkness’ Deleted Scenes, Part II

Today we can present the rest of the Star Trek Into Darkness deleted scenes, available exclusively through the film’s Xbox SmartGlass second-screen app.

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Thomas Calls Marcus (0:47)

During the roundtable meeting at Starfleet Headquarters, Admiral Marcus reveals to the Command staff that Thomas Harewood sent him a message from the Section 31 archives before he detonated his explosive device. In the final version of the film, we only see Harewood sending a text-based transmission; this cut scene includes a planned video chat removed from the sequence.

Original dialogue in white; cut dialogue in orange.

Harewood sits down at his station in the Kelvin Archive under London, and begins tapping commands into his console.

Inside Starfleet Command, we pan down from high above Admiral Marcus’ desk, where an Original Series-style Constitution-class model hangs above the room, along with his row of model ships against the far wall. His commpanel beeps, signaling an incoming transmission.

MARCUS’ ASSISTANT (ON COMM)
Admiral Marcus, priority-one transmission incoming from London.

MARCUS
Put it through.

HAREWOOD (ON SCREEN)
Admiral, sir, I have a message for you from John Erickson.

Marcus peers closer at the screen.

HAREWOOD
He said you’d know why he did this.

Fast zoom to a stunned Marcus as we cut to a close-up of Harewood’s Starfleet Academy ring, an explosive device the officer drops into a glass of water.

Into Darkness editors Maryann Brandon and Mary Jo Markey talk about the deletion of this scene in the iTunes commentary track:

Markey: “This used to be, in it’s original form, a phone call to our Admiral, giving him a message from the baddie, from Benedict’s character. We felt that it was very important not to introduce the Admiral in any way or tip our hand about who he would become later on in the film. We realized to hold him back for a long time would be more shocking.”

Brandon: “Also we were just afraid that it would arouse suspicion.”

Markey: “Yeah, and so, you want hold back the guy who’s supposed to be the head of Starfleet and present him in a more majestic, officious way.”

There are two major things of note in this scene — firstly, the name ‘John Erickson’ for Benedict Cumberbatch’s character. This is a reference to the early Space Seed script featuring a villain named ‘Harold Erickson,’ who would later be changed to Khan Singh after Ricardo Montalban was cast in the part. It’s likely that this name was changed to ‘John Harrison’ when the efforts to hide Cumberbatch’s true identity were ramped up during the production of the film.

Obviously, the second surprise in this sequence is the giant Constitution-class model hanging above Marcus’ desk, the USS Biddeford (NCC-0718). The design of the ship itself raises several questions: was this the original design in this universe, changed after the Kelvin attack in the first film? Was Marcus involved with the design? Why is it named after Biddeford, Maine?

The registry number is also of interest. The number 0718 appears here, on another ship docked at Earth, and in the name of the Enterprise’s cybernetically-enhanced science officer.

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Captain’s Log (0:45)

When Kirk and Spock are called to Admiral Marcus’ office after the film’s opening sequence, we learn that while Spock submitted a truthful recounting of the mission to Nibiru, Kirk lied and put through a falsified report. This cut sequence details just how brazenly dishonest his mission log actually was.

ORIGINAL, DELETED VERSION:

KIRK
Congratulations, Spock — you just saved the world.

Two engineering techs spray the science officer down with a cooling spray. The scene cuts to the bridge sometime later; Kirk is back in uniform.

KIRK (IN CAPTAIN’S CHAIR)
Captain’s Log, Stardate 2259.55.

A crowd of Nibirans watches the Enterprise fly through the volcano smoke, their eyes wide with awe.

KIRK (V.O.)
We’ve completed our survey of the newly-discovered Class M planet designated Nibiru. Intelligent life was observed. The species is primitive; indications of early language and even religion were noted.

A few of the natives reach toward the ship above.

KIRK (ON BRIDGE)
I thought it wise to stay off the planet altogether, lest we somehow interfere with their way of life.

The Enterprise rockets away from the volcano.

KIRK (V.O.)
If there’s one word I would use to describe this mission, it would be “uneventful.”

The Nibirians speak to each other in their native language. Their world has changed.

KIRK (ON BRIDGE)
Kirk out.

His officers — Sulu, Chekov, Uhura, Scotty, and McCoy — stare at him in stunned and incredulous silence. Uhura turns and walks away, disapproving.

KIRK
They saw us! Big deal!

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Spock materializes on the transporter pad, steaming with heat from the volcano’s interior. As he realizes that he’s not dead, Kirk and McCoy run into the transporter room to greet him.

KIRK
Spock! You all right?

SPOCK
Captain, you let them see our ship!

MCCOY
Ah, he’s fine.

UHURA (ON COMM)
Bridge to Captain Kirk.

KIRK
Yes, Lieutenant?

UHURA (ON BRIDGE)
Is Commander Spock on board, sir?

KIRK (ON COMM)
Safely and soundly.

UHURA
Please notify him that his device has successfully detonated.

KIRK (IN TRANSPORTER ROOM)
Hear that? Congratulations, Spock — you just saved the world.

SPOCK
You violated the Prime Directive!

KIRK
Oh, come on, Spock. They saw us. Big deal!

On Nibiru, the natives are excitedly crowding around their tribal elder, who is drawing a familiar shape in the red soil. Their sacred scroll is tossed aside as the outline of the Enterprise is revealed: this world has a new God.

Leaving the false report as a surprise works to build tension between Kirk and Spock when Marcus throws it in his face later on, but to show the captain lying to blatantly in front of his bridge crew? It makes the other officers look just as bad for not calling him on his actions.

It was a very good call to remove this sequence.

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Kirk Watches Pike Get Shot (0:49)

In the final cut of the film, Spock is the only witness to Pike’s injury and death as Kirk tries to shoot down John Harrison’s ship from another room — but that’s not how the original sequence transpired.

Weapons fire blankets the conference room as everyone dives for cover. Kirk is helping a wounded officer when he locks eyes with Pike from across the room; the Admiral is crawling to safety.

KIRK
(Screaming) PIKE!

Pike sees him for a mere moment before being hit with an energy burst. Kirk, in shock, dodges the blasts and runs to his side.

KIRK
You’re gonna be fine. You’re gonna be fine, all right? We’re gonna get you help.

Kirk applies pressure to a massive wound on Pike’s chest. Other officers return fire, and Harrison’s ship retreats into the night as Admiral Marcus runs into the room.

MARCUS
Get those people outta here!

SPOCK
Captain!

Spock appears at Kirk’s side as Harrison’s ship flies back to finish the job.

OFFICER (OFF-SCREEN)
He’s coming back! He’s coming back!

KIRK
Gotta get him outta here.

Spock takes over caring for Pike as Kirk runs to pick up his rifle, intent on stopping Harrison’s attack.

The recutting of this sequence is addressed by editor Maryann Brandon in both the Best Buy-exclusive extra ‘Unlocking the Cut.’

Brandon“In the original script, when Pike dies, Kirk is actually in the room and sees him die. While it was in the film before, it didn’t land. We kept thinking, ‘Why isn’t this working?’

We decided to re-cut it so that Kirk actually takes off out of the room and goes to try to knock out the enemy ship, and then finds out Pike is dead. That was a great solve; you’re totally with Kirk in his emotional loss of this father figure.”

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Scotty Talks to Hangar Control (0:47)

One of the big issues people had with the role of Section 31 in Into Darkness was with how easily Scotty was able to infiltrate the top-secret Vengeance hangar orbiting Jupiter.

Turns out it really wasn’t so difficult to begin with.

Scotty flies above the Io station, his shuttle a tiny speck against the massive construct. He hangs over the edge of the station, watching as a large set of hangar doors open to allow an incoming flotilla of support vessels to enter.

STATION COMM
Delta Team, deliver your thrusters to Loading Dock 12.

SHUTTLE COMM
USS Vengeance bridge crew, requesting entry to construction hangar.

Scotty breaks radio silence, and begins to bluff his way into the caravan.

SCOTTY
This is… shuttle Copernicus. I have the…

He thinks hard, clearly not used to this kind of improvisation.

SCOTTY
…hull plating and the coffee cells for the food synthesizers.

His face bunches up in anticipation for getting caught.

STATION COMM
Shuttle Copernicus, we do not have you on our registry.

He regroups, and tries a more direct attack.

SCOTTY
What the hell do you think I’m doin’ here? Huh? You think I just happened upon an enormous box and thought I’d take a wee look? No! I’ve got a job to do! I can go back, if you like. Just give me your name, I’ll tell ’em who sent me.

A long pause. He’s sure the game is up.

STATION COMM
Supply shuttles, you’re clear to enter. You too, Copernicus.

The Copernicus joins the rest of the shuttles on their journey into the large hangar bay. Scotty looks up at the massive starship contained inside the structure, his jaw dropping in surprise.

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The Harewoods (0:21)

Removed from the end of the film, Jim Kirk meets another citizen saved by Khan’s blood.

After the memorial ceremony at Starfleet Headquarters, officials of all species are milling about the campus. As Kirk approaches his officers, he hears a woman calling to him from the crowd.

It’s Rima Harewood, wife and widow of the officer Khan coerced into destroying the Kelvin Archive in London.

RIMA HAREWOOD
Captain Kirk?

Kirk turns and sees her, then spies young Lucille at her side.

RIMA HAREWOOD
Thank you for your words.

KIRK
Of course.

Kirk looks down at the girl; she’s the picture of health.
He reaches out to shake her hand.

KIRK
Hi.

LUCILLE HAREWOOD
Hi.

The two look at each other for a moment, smiles on their faces.
Do they sense the shared connection?

After a beat, Kirk releases her hand.

KIRK
Excuse me.

The captain turns and heads to his waiting crewmates.

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As far as we know, this is the last of the retailer-exclusive content for Star Trek Into Darkness, and even though it’s taken almost six months for us to find it, we’re glad the deleted scenes question can finally be put to bed with these nine entries.

Here’s hoping they become available in a more widely-available format for fans at some point in the future.

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Trek Comics Review #30: ‘Parallel Lives, Part II’

Our Trek Comics editor Patrick Hayes is back with a review of this month’s issue of IDW Publishing’s Star Trek comic series, “Parallel Lives, Part II.”

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Cat Staggs once again provides the regular cover and I like it! I enjoy seeing alternate versions of the crew, so why not a gender swap? Each character is unique, and she doesn’t use a cookie-cutter approach to making their faces. I also like the cosmic swirl/mist around the characters, which is a nice way to highlight the Enterprise below them. A special credit is given to Gabriel Koerner for the Enterprise model used for this illustration.  Grade: A.

A Subscription photo cover is the other choice for you to pursue this month with a nice shot of Zoe Saldana as Uhura from Into Darkness. This picture choice is appropriate as it’s the closest we’ve gotten in rebooted Trek with a strong female. I wish the border at the bottom and the top of the page had been brighter because, though it does match her jacket, I’m afraid it’s going to blend in with other new comics on the shelves too easily.  Grade: A.

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I could have had this story go on for another issue. Mike Johnson’s final part of this two parter, with a story consultant credit going to Roberto Orci, has both crews meet after the space anomaly has both Enterprises starring each other down. This could have been a real cheese-fest, but Johnson hits all the right marks with terrific character comments. I wish that something more had occurred than just their meeting, though.

Oh, sure. You know that at some point both Spocks are going to look upon one another and say “Fascinating,” but you would not expect the bottom of Page 4, the last panel of 5, the stunning cameo on 16 (worth the price of the issue alone), the stunning cameo on 17, and the terrific last line of the fourth panel on 19.

This was fun. I can’t remember the last time a Star Trek comic was fun and not concerned with the end of the universe or someone’s death. It’s about time Trek was fun again.  Grade: A–.

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I liked Yasmin Lian’s art as well. Now that the crew that I’m used to seeing has appeared, it’s neat to see her take on them. I was impressed with how closely the faces I’m familiar with resembled the actors who play them. Particular stand outs were Scotty and Chekov who looked terrific!

There are still the occasional problems with characters’ hands (Jane’s at the top of Page 7 and Spock on 16) and there are some awkward poses (The first panel of 11 and that “blue” handgrip on 14). True, the Enterprise…er, Enterprises are too simple, but there’s more than enough pluses to win me over (Scotty’s grins, McCoy’s frowns, and Pages 16 and 17’s surprises).

I would be more than happy to see Liang be the regular penciller on this book.  Grade: A–.

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Zac Atkinson does a good job on the book’s colors. His shading of the characters’ faces (Pick any page or panel–it doesn’t matter where your eyes fall) gives them a nice dimensional quality. I was happy to see the conference room, if only momentarily to get away form the lens flared bridge. The guest appearances were great, with muted colors to show their otherworldliness.

I’d be delighted to see Atkinson on this book monthly as well.  Grade: A.

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Dialogue and narration, plus ten sound effects from Gilberto Lazcano. This isn’t a sound-heavy book, but those that do appear look okay. The sound at the top of 14 is lost due to the coloring which has it meld too much with background. A red would have been better and been a thematic clue to the fourth panel on the same page.  Grade: A–.

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Bottom line: In the words of William Shatner’s James T. Kirk, “It was fun.”

It’s about time Star Trek got fun again.   Grade: A–.

– Reviewed by Comics Editor Patrick Hayes

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Dayton Ward Interview: “Peaceable Kingdoms”

We last spoke with Trek author Dayton Ward last July in anticipation of his Original Series novel From History’s Shadow — and now he’s back to talk with us about Peaceable Kingdoms, the final chapter in 2013’s Federation-spanning crossover miniseries The Fall.

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TrekCore: Thank you very much for speaking with us again — we’ve very much enjoyed The Fall and are eager to get your take on the series, and your book, Peaceable Kingdoms. You’ve mentioned before that you’re “batting clean-up” on this series. What has the process of wrapping up the various threads been like?

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Dayton Ward: It was fun, as well as challenging. These mini-series events bring an added level of complexity, because you’re working to remain consistent with what the other contributors are doing with their own books.

All of you also are trying to “stay in formation” and respect everything that’s come before, both in the on-screen “canon” as well as the previous novels which have led up to these books. So, there’s a lot of homework when you write books that have a great degree of interconnectivity. But, that’s also part of the fun!

TrekCore: While reading The Fall novels, I couldn’t help but see parallels between what is happening in the books and what goes on in the day-to-day politics of the “real world.” Were there any particular inspirations that you drew upon for Peaceable Kingdoms?

Dayton Ward: I guess it’s no mystery that the greatest real-world parallel to the plots driving many of these books are the 9/11 attacks and the United States’ response to those tragic events. It’s not a perfect parallel, of course, but In the case of Peaceable Kingdoms, our nation’s heightened security state is obviously a point of inspiration, depicted largely in Picard’s shifting perspectives with regard to the Federation’s diplomatic policies and Starfleet’s role in the aftermath of the Borg invasion and the rise of the Typhon Pact.

TrekCore: Going forward from The Fall, what kind of fallout can we expect to see? Are things mostly resolved in this series, or will we see repercussions affecting the overall story in the future?

Dayton Ward: The Federation’s relationship with the Typhon Pact will continue to factor into future storylines as appropriate, as will the situation with the Cardassians. As for fallout from President Ishan’s fall from power and grace, I’m not sure just yet how that will play out, or who might be the writer tackling it.

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TrekCore: Based on the events of Peaceable Kingdoms and the preceding novels, a number of characters have seen their circumstances change considerably, Riker perhaps most of all. If you have any insight into future goings-on, what does this mean going forward for the Titan series?

Dayton Ward: Riker and the Titan, Sisko and the Robinson, Dax and the Aventine, Julian Bashir and Deep Space 9 soon will be revisited with new stories, and I honestly don’t know anything about any of those characters. I left certain things purposely vague because I didn’t want to hamstring the authors who end up writing post-Fall stories for the different ships and crews. Even the exact nature of the Enterprise’s new mission was left unexplained, so the next writer would have as much freedom as possible to develop their story without having to adhere to anything I might establish. I guess we’ll see!

TrekCore: The end of Peaceable Kingdoms sees Admirals Akaar and Riker issuing new orders for the Enterprise, seemingly heralding a new era of greater exploration. Does this represent a sea change in the 24th century book line? Will we be seeing fewer political stories and more tales with an exploration or “new worlds” aspect to them?

Dayton Ward: As I said, the Typhon Pact is still out there, and they’ve been uncharacteristically quiet while much of the aftermath of President Bacco’s assassination played out. I can’t imagine we won’t see political stories from time to time, but Star Trek still needs to be about exploration, too, and that includes the trouble our heroes can find when doing that exploring. So, while Picard and the Enterprise will soon be warping off to “see what’s out there,” but that doesn’t mean they won’t be recalled if something big happens back home.

TrekCore: Since the last time we spoke, the Trek literature world has been rocked by the announcement of Seekers. How has your work on that project been progressing?

Dayton Ward: David Mack, Kevin Dilmore, and I are tremendously excited at being able to write what’s basically a spin-off of the Star Trek: Vanguard series, with which we had so much fun. There’s been a great feeling of “getting the band back together” for this new series, and the three of us worked together to create a series writer’s guide as well as develop the story which spans the series’ first two books.

Kevin and I delivered our manuscript for the second book, Point of Divergence, during the first week in February. David Mack’s finishing up his review of the copy-edited manuscript for Second Nature, the novel which will launch the series. So far, everything’s on track for both books to be published this summer. If the sales are strong, you could see at least one and possibly two Seekers novels on the 2015 schedule.

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TrekCore: In our last interview, you mentioned a Trek novel on the go for early to mid-2015. Are there any further developments about that one that you are willing or able to share?

Dayton Ward: This is a separate project from anything Seekers-related, and while I did sign contracts a couple of weeks ago, I’ve not yet been given the green light to talk about this book, which is probably good because at this point I really have nothing to say beyond the characters it might feature. I’ll be writing an outline for the novel between now and the middle of March, and likely writing the novel during the late spring/early summer months. Stay tuned!

TrekCore: Simon and Schuster will soon be releasing a tongue-in-cheek Star Trek title, “Fun with Kirk and Spock,” modeled on the old “Fun with Dick and Jane” primary readers. On your blog, you mention that you wish you could have written it. Are there any other “whimsical” books you would like to see? If you were given a Trek project to work on with no restrictions whatsoever, what would you like to write?

Dayton Ward: I absolutely love it when Star Trek products embrace a bit of whimsy, be they stylized or caricature figures like the Pop Vinyl offerings or the Quogs or Mr. Potato Heads, or comics stories crossing Star Trek with Doctor Who or the Legion of Super Heroes, to lighthearted books that go for humor. I have a few ideas for books in this mold, and I’m actually finishing up a proposal for such a book to submit to a publisher in the coming weeks. As for a Trek project I could write with no restrictions, I’m going to go with my favorite answer for this: Captain Proton novels.

TrekCore: Are there any other projects that you have on the go that you would like to tell us about? Shameless plugs are always welcome!

Dayton Ward: I recently contributed an essay for anthology to be published by the Sequart Organization, New Life and New Civilizations: Exploring Star Trek Comics, later this summer. It will feature essays from several writers, including a few names familiar to fans of Star Trek fiction and comics. The essay I wrote takes a look back at the second run of Marvel Comics’ Star Trek offerings from the late 1990s.

TrekCore: As always, thank you so much for taking the time to speak with us. I’m sure we’ll chat again as the release date for your Seekers novel approaches!

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REVIEW: “Star Trek: The Fall — Peaceable Kingdoms”

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Peaceable Kingdoms
By Dayton Ward
Release Date: December 31, 2013
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From the back cover:

Following the resolution of the fertility crisis that nearly caused their extinction, the Andorian people now stand ready to rejoin the United Federation of Planets. The return of one of its founding member worlds is viewed by many as the first hopeful step beyond the uncertainty and tragedy that have overshadowed recent events in the Alpha Quadrant.

But as the Federation looks to the future and the special election to name President Bacco’s permanent successor, time is running out to apprehend those responsible for the respected leader’s brutal assassination. Even as elements of the Typhon Pact are implicated for the murder, Admiral William Riker holds key knowledge of the true assassins— a revelation that could threaten the fragile Federation-Cardassian alliance.  

Questions and concerns also continue to swell around Bacco’s interim successor, Ishan Anjar, who uses the recent bloodshed to further a belligerent, hawkish political agenda against the Typhon Pact. With the election looming, Riker dispatches his closest friend, Captain Jean-Luc Picard, in a desperate attempt to uncover the truth.

But as Picard and the Enterprise crew pursue the few remaining clues, Riker must act on growing suspicions that someone within Ishan’s inner circle has been in league with the assassins from the very beginning . . . .

My thoughts:

The Fall has been an excellent series, for the most part. With a bit of a rough start from Revelation and Dust, what followed were some of the best Trek books ever written. After the superb set-up from the preceding four books, how does Peaceable Kingdoms compare? Well… sadly, not nearly as good as the prior installments.

Don’t get me wrong: Peaceable Kingdoms does an adequate job of tying up the loose ends and resolving the overall story of The Fall. However, it all feels a little “paint-by-numbers.” I do understand that the really great set-up of the previous novels set a very high bar that is difficult to match, but I found it impossible to escape the feeling that something was missing.

fall-coversIf you’ve read this far, then you don’t need all the plot recapping ‘Peaceable Kingdoms’ provides.

One aspect of Peaceable Kingdoms that annoyed me was the constant recapping of events from the previous books. While this sort of rehash doesn’t normally bother me (after all, someone may not have read the previous books), it seemed that this recap was done numerous times throughout the book. I didn’t understand why so much information was being rehashed so frequently.

The final revelation about the character of Ishan Anjar was somewhat disappointing. However, I did appreciate the fact that he believed that he was doing what was right for the Federation. The best villains are the ones who truly believe that they are on the side of the angels. However, I would have enjoyed a more nuanced examination of the two opposing sides of the debate: warhawk vs. moderate. I felt as though the warhawk side was portrayed too one-dimensionally.

Having said that, there was one instance in which the lack of information from the “other side” was welcome: at one point, the Enterprise is heading towards a confrontation with another Federation starship, sent by the President Pro Tem to apprehend Dr. Crusher and a team from the Enterprise. Numerous attempts to communicate with the vessel are met with silence, and we are left to wonder what exactly will happen when the two vessels meet. Will she join us, or will she fire on us? I felt that being “kept in the dark” with regards to the action happening on the other starship added to the tension of the moment.

Despite the shortcomings previously mentioned, it was great to see the Next Generation crew back in action again. As with last year’s Brinkmanship, Dr. Crusher takes a central role, which was once again very welcome. Some of the peripheral characters have gotten short shrift in most of the books, so it is always nice to see them take center stage from time to time.

crusherBeverly Crusher gets the focus she’s been denied in the series thus far.

Finally, the book ended on a high note. The implied “new direction” that the Next Generation-era books seem to be headed in is very welcome. I am very excited at the possibility of future stories of exploration and the new path the Federation will be charting. A greater emphasis on exploration and the re-introduction of multi-year missions of discovery are exciting prospects. I’m very curious to see where future books will take this idea!

Final thoughts:

The final book in The Fall connects all of the dots that it needs to, but in a lot of ways just kind of seemed to go through the paces. I understand that the really great set-up of the previous novels is hard to match, but I feel something was lacking. I am a big fan of Dayton Ward’s work to date, and as I said, Peaceable Kingdoms is a satisfactory ending. However, it lacks the “something special” that entries like The Crimson ShadowA Ceremony of Losses, and The Poisoned Chalice had.

– Reviewed by Literature Editor Dan Gunther

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EXCLUSIVE! ‘Into Darkness’ Deleted Scenes, Part I

Just when you thought we were all done with Star Trek Into Darkness, it’s time to cover the last piece of bonus content: the long-rumored, unannounced, basically forgotten deleted scenes!

Like most of the other bonus features produced for the twelfth Trek film, this cut footage — along with several other video clips and visual effects breakdowns — has been relegated to a single retailer. It’s not a store-exclusive DVD or Blu-ray release; it’s not even an iTunes download like the film’s feature commentary track.

This rare footage is found in the Xbox SmartGlass second-screen app, which only works with digital copies of Into Darkness purchased through the Xbox video store. That’s it; no other source includes the cut scenes.

It’s taken us a while, but we’ve finally gotten our hands on a copy of the Xbox SmartGlass content… and now, we can begin to share it with all of you. Due to copyright issues, we’re not able to post the video from the scenes — nor can we provide copies, so please don’t ask! — but we will present detailed descriptions and transcriptions of each scene.

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Pike’s Office, Original Ending (1:52)

This original version of the meeting in Pike’s office underwent several rounds of reshoots as the filmmaking team worked to find just the right tone and balance for Kirk’s relationship to the Admiral.

In the final version of the film, the sentiments expressed in this scene were split into two longer, separate acts, with the ‘kind’ Pike making an appearance in a San Francisco bar before the two men are called in to Starfleet Headquarters.

Original dialogue in white; cut dialogue in orange.

— INTERIOR PIKE’S OFFICE —
Spock has just been dismissed. Kirk is alone with the Admiral.

PIKE
You have any idea what a pain in the ass you are?

KIRK
(Nods) I think so, sir.

PIKE
So tell me what you did wrong.
What’s the lesson to be learned here?

KIRK
Never trust a Vulcan.

PIKE
See, you can’t even answer the question! You lied on an official report — you lied! You think the rules don’t apply to you because you disagree with them!

KIRK
With all due respect, sir, I thought that’s why you talked me into signing up in the first place. It’s why you gave me your ship.

PIKE
And now it’s the reason I’m taking her back.

Kirk, shocked, turns to face Pike.

PIKE
Effective immediately, I’m reinstating myself as captain of the Enterprise.

KIRK
What was I supposed to to, let Spock die?

PIKE
It’s not about Spock.

KIRK
Then what is it about?
You’re punishing me for saving someone’s life, Admiral!

PIKE
No! I’m teaching you, like I should have done a long time ago.
I’m transferring Spock; you’ll be my first officer.

Kirk falls silent as he takes in the news. Slowly, he moves to sit in one of the office’s chairs; Pike sits as well, facing him.

PIKE
You think you’re infallible. That you can’t make mistakes. But the moment is gonna come when you’ll realize that you were wrong about that… and you’re gonna get yourself and everyone under your command killed.

Kirk looks the Admiral in the eye, listening to his every word.

PIKE
There’s greatness in you, Jim, but there’s not an ounce of humility. You want that chair back? You’re gonna have to show me you respect it.

Pike pauses, making sure Kirk understands what he’s being told.

PIKE
Dismissed.

Into Darkness editors Maryann Brandon and Mary Jo Markey discuss the recutting of this conversation in the iTunes commentary track:

Mary Jo Markey: “There was a need to reestablish the father/son [relationship between Pike and Kirk], so we had to create dialogue between them and a dynamic between them where you felt like Pike was stern and still his admiral, but he also believes in this young captain, and he’s terribly disappointed that [Kirk] chose to break the Prime Directive.

Pike takes the ship away, but he also needs to give Kirk hope that he will personally take him under his wing — and he still believes in him. It wasn’t until we landed on actually having an additional scene that didn’t take place in the office; it really needed a breather to land. And in the original scene, he took the ship away from Kirk — we changed it so that Starfleet took it away and that Pike couldn’t do anything about it.”

Maryann Brandon: “We tried to do this thing where Pike took the ship away, and then he tried to be sort of fatherly to Kirk. Finally we just gave up and realized that it had to be two separate scenes.”

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Carol’s Accent Explained (0:22)

Everybody asked why Carol Marcus turned out British in this alternate universe; here’s the explanatory conversation cut from the film.

Captain Kirk has Carol Marcus by the arm, escorting her through the corridors of the Enterprise.

CAROL
Are the torpedoes in the weapons bay?

KIRK
Loaded and ready to fire. What are they?

CAROL
I don’t know, that’s why I thought I might transfer on to your ship to find out.

Carol turns, stopping the walk-and-talk.

CAROL
Why, I do apologize for that. By the way, if I caused you any problems, I am sorry. I’m Carol Marcus.

KIRK
James Kirk.

CAROL
(Remembering) Torpedos.

She spins around, racing away, heading for the shuttlebay. As the pair travel through the ship, they have to traverse the catwalks running through the engine room.

KIRK
The torpedo bay’s in the other direction.

CAROL
Yes, I’m well aware.

Kirk is tired of her deception.

KIRK
Look, you can drop the accent, all right?

CAROL
No, that’s real. My father was stationed in London when I was born, and my mother raised me there.

KIRK
So, these torpedoes — they’re your father’s? Are you investigating your own father?

The pair arrive in the shuttlebay.

CAROL
When I joined Starfleet, I had access to every program he oversaw. I heard he was developing these prototype torpedoes — when I went to confront him about it, he wouldn’t even see me. That’s when I discovered the torpedoes had disappeared from all official records.

KIRK
Then he gave ’em to me.

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Extended Klingon Conversation (1:18)

The original version of Uhura’s encounter with the cadre of Klingon warriors had a decidedly different tone than the tense conversation that made it into the final cut of the film.

ORIGINAL, DELETED VERSION:

UHURA
(In Klingon) Who fired at my ship?

The Klingon commander silently approaches.

UHURA
(In Klingon) I am here looking for someone.
Someone who stole from me.

The Klingon commander removes his helmet.
Inside the scout ship, Kirk, and Spock watch the encounter.

KIRK
I don’t like this.

We return to the windy surface of Kronos.

KLINGON COMMANDER
(In Klingon) And this thief is a Klingon?

UHURA
(In Klingon) Yes. He was my lover… and now he hides in this deserted city. A coward.

She smiles defiantly, looking forward to taking her revenge.

UHURA
(In Klingon) I have come to find him and take back what’s mine.

The Klingon commander grabs Uhura by the neck.

KLINGON COMMANDER
(In Klingon) You lie!

Inside the ship, Kirk runs to the weapons locker.

SPOCK
Captain?

KIRK
I’m goin’ in!

Back outside, Uhura keeps up the act.

UHURA
(In Klingon) Then kill me. At least I will die with honor!

As the Klingon looks her deep in the eyes, Kirk and company race out of the ship, firing at the rest of the warriors. Uhura twists around in surprise.

UHURA
(In English) Shit.

Taking advantage of the distraction, Uhura grabs a knife from the Klingon’s belt and stabs him in the leg. The fight is on.

FINAL VERSION:

UHURA
(In Klingon) I am here to help you.Inside the scout ship, Kirk arms the rest of the team.UHURA
(In Klingon) With respect. There is a criminal hiding in these ruins. He has killed many of our people.

The Klingon commander removes his helmet.

KLINGON COMMANDER
(In Klingon) Why should I care about a human killing humans?

UHURA
(In Klingon) Because you care about honor — and this man has none. You and your people are in danger.

The Klingon commander grabs Uhura by the neck, and begins to draw a knife from his boot. From out of nowhere, a masked man begins shooting energy blasts at the Klingons. Taking advantage of the distraction, Uhura grabs the knife from the Klingon and stabs him in the leg as Kirk and company come out of their ship firing.

While the original version of this confrontation allows Uhura to come across as a stronger and a much more capable officer, but at the same time, it has Kirk screwing up the whole thing by misjudging the intentions of the Klingon commander.

The final version of the scene doesn’t give Uhura as much to do, but it allows the masked Khan to serve as the disruption rather than yet showcase yet another Kirk screw-up.

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Kronos Fight Before Khan Arrives (0:43)

Carrying on from the cut Uhura sequence detailed above, the away team is put in a tough spot.

The fight is over, and two Klingons have Kirk on the ground. One of them puts a boot on Kirk’s neck and aims a rifle at his head.

The rest of the away team — Spock, Uhura, and a guard — come out of cover, surrendering to save their captain. The Klingon commander shouts to his subordinate, giving a shocking order.

UHURA
(Shouting) NO!

The Starfleet security guard takes a rifle blast in the chest, falling to the ground. Kirk’s eyes go wide with surprise as Uhura violently struggles against her Klingon captor. The Klingon commander then gives the order to kill Kirk — when energy blasts fly out of the fog, killing the Klingons. Khan has arrived.

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We hope you enjoyed this exclusive look at the first round of Star Trek Into Darkness deleted scenes — and we’ll be reviewing several more scenes in the next few days, so stick around!

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