Our Trek Comics editor Patrick Hayes is back with a review of this month’s issue of IDW Publishing’s ongoing Star Trek crossover comic series: the second chapter of “The Primate Directive,” where the Enterprise crew finds the Planet of the Apes!
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The regular cover, by Rachel Stott and Charlie Kirchoff, has me hearing Shatner saying, “You maniacs! You blew it up! Ah, damn you! God damn you all to Hell!” Love the iconic statue, Taylor looking like Charlton Heston, and Kirk staring at the ground. Excellent layout as the title leads to the statue’s arm, which leads to Kirk, who directs viewers to Taylor as the final revelation.
The subscription cover is by the talented Joe Corroney and Brian Miller. Take all my money now! Kor smiles as he displays his phaser, backed by a multitude of gorillas bearing rifles. The Klingon is flawlessly rendered as John Colicos. How could any Trek fan not get warm inside looking at that devious smile? And those apes–fantastic! The coloring is perfect with Kor’s golden sash being the focus and the black and violet of the ape soldiers escalating into a burnt rose sky. This is poster and print quality!
The final cover is the retailer incentive design, created to look like a Gold Key Comics cover. Yeah, I need to track this down, too. It’s a split photocover of Shatner and Heston with the copy, “It’s the crossover nobody ever expected. It’s a madhouse! A madhouse!” There’s no credit given on the inside cover for who designed this, but they deserve a lot of thanks for going retro… and maybe a little something extra in their paycheck.
Last month I wanted — needed — more ape interaction with the Enterprise crew. In Scott Tipton and David Tipton’s saga this month I got it, big time!
The previous issue ended with Kirk, Spock, and two security officers (Uh, oh. Red shirts…What could possibly go wrong?) witnessing the gorillas conversing with Kor. The Enterprise crew is discovered by two gorillas that were in the trees. The humans make a run for it, giving the primates a reason to fire at them.
Kirk stuns one with his phaser after a bullet nicks one of his men. The other ape stops his pursuit to aid his fallen comrade, allowing Kor and Mairus to arrive. The general warns Kor that such public actions, “could destroy our entire arrangement.” Kor says he can handle things, “I don’t think my ‘friends’ have the stomach for a fight…”
Far from their enemies, Kirk wonders what’s happened to the humans of this parallel Earth. They soon hear a rustling nearby. A quick trip back to the Enterprise to hash out what’s going on and another landing party returns to the surface where they’re set down next to “something more recognizable as home.” Page 9 has them going to an iconic landmark and encountering legendary characters from the first Apes film.
Taylor’s interactions with Kirk and Co. are phenomenal. Pages 11 and 12 are a gut kick as Taylor bets for help, but fans know from the television series what Kirk’s response will be. The Tiptons have masterfully aped (Sorry, I couldn’t help it) Taylor and all of his companions’ voices. The desires of these characters are strong, with one individual on Pages 18 and 19 being passionate.
What occurs on the final page isn’t really a surprise, but it will have readers wondering for 30 days how his conflict will escalate.
Doing the artwork for a series based on characters from a film or television series must be incredibly daunting. The artist must make the characters and backgrounds similar to what fans are familiar with or they’ll be criticized by an obsessive mob. Artist Rachel Stott does an amazing job that will satisfy fans of both the Apes and Trek franchises.
Last issue she proved she was very adroit at creating Star Trek characters who mirror the actors that portray them. Her Kirk and Spock look great, and getting more time in this story are McCoy and Chekov, with the former having a fantastic silent reaction in the third panel on Page 11. I would expect no less from the good doctor.
The characters from Planet of the Apes look spectacular. Gorillas, chimpanzees, and orangutans all appear in this installment. They all look just as the fans would want them, with the gorillas on Pages 2 and 3 awesome. The leader on Page 4 is amazing — a reader can feel the visual threat given in the third panel. The chimpanzees are also impressive as they resemble the actors who played them. Taylor is a bit fifty-fifty for looking like Heston, with Page 18 being a good example of page where he does and does not look like the Oscar winning actor.
One nit: when the apes appear on Page 2 they have no rifles, but in the second panel they have the weapons on their backs. I originally thought that the Enterprise crew was surrounded by two pairs of gorilla scouts, but that’s not the case. Some rifles need to be added in the first panel for the collected edition.
Charlie Kirchoff provides a nice depth to the art with his colors. Throughout the book shading on characters’ faces, human and ape, gives the illustrations a three-dimensional effect. I especially like his shadings on the apes shown in the first four pages. He’s also doing a solid job on the backgrounds, such as the forest and fields on Pages 1 – 5.
When the story moves to a cave by a beach, there’s some impressive work done on the rocks, such as on 13. I also like that coloring was used to show a transmission from a communicator. Very nice.
Dialogue, whispers, sound effects, communicator transmissions, the captain’s log, and a “To be continued!” are crafted by Tom B. Long. I am pleased to see the communicator’s transmission in a different font than that of dialogue–very smart and appropriate.
I know it wasn’t Long’s call, but shouldn’t there have been a sound for the phaser’s fire on Page 3 and not just the hit? Another item to add to the collected edition.
Our Trek Comics editor Patrick Hayes is back with a review of this month’s issue of IDW Publishing’s Star Trek comic series: the final chapter of “The Q Gambit,” the last entry in the six-part saga.
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On the illustrative cover, Gul Dukat — the god — has transported Spock, Kirk, and Q to deep space and released them. They tumble from his hands and into the cosmos, not long to survive in this environment. This is another great cover from interior artist Tony Shasteen. The image is a good representation of what fans are expecting from the Cardassian that’s bonded with a Pah-wraith.
The photocover is an extreme close-up of Armin Shimerman as everyone’s favorite Ferengi. His eyes are as wide open as his ears after probably hearing some new tidbit of information that’s upset his plans. This is a great photo, but as Quark is not in this issue, so this choice of photo seems like filler that was handy.
The final chapter of “The Q Gambit” by Mike Johnson, begins with Kirk’s narration (rather than a traditional captain’s log). He’s aboard the Defiant in his future. The Enterprise is under the command of new newly-enhanced Dukat, along with several Jem’Hadar.
Kirk is questioning Q’s motives for pulling him and his crew to this horrific time period. He learns the Q Continuum is going to fall before the Pah-wraiths, so the seemingly-omnipotent being yanked Kirk and company forward to stop them since the Q have been unable to do the deed. “So, yes, captain, though it brings me no joy and no small amount of embarrassment…I need you help.”
Meanwhile, deep inside the wormhole, the captured Enterprise is being swarmed by the tell-tale sign of Pah-wraith energy as its new commander raves with orange eyes, “Yes! At last, my ascension begins!”
How could this get any worse? Instantly! On Page 5, the Pah-wraiths do something that surprises Dukat. The tables are then turned as the Cardassian surprises the Pah-wraiths, and has a proposition for them. When wasn’t Dukat manipulating a situation to his advantage on Deep Space Nine?
Events go quickly on Page 12, with quite a shock occurring on 13. Just as readers may think there’s no hope for our heroes something happens that was standing in front of everyone for some time. Johnson has got each character’s voice ringing true, and it’s impossible not to hear Chris Pine, Avery Brooks, Zachary Quinto, Marc Alaimo, or John de Lancie delivering their lines.
Highlights include the fourth panel on Page 14, the final panel on 15, the second on 18, all of 19, the final dialogue between Q and Kirk (which includes a great admission), the final dialogue between Kirk and Spock, and the final page’s coda which bookends this saga and will leave Next Generation fans smiling.
Tony Shasteen closes this out with the same high standards he began with. The characters look great.
The standouts are Kirk, Q, and Dukat. Much of Shasteen’s work is photo realistic, and this issue is no exception. Dukat is one of my favorite Trek villains and to have him rendered so powerfully — so evilly — makes me want to jump into the book and take him out myself. He looks amazing on Pages 6 – 8, 13, 18, and 19. Kirk looks particularly strong on 10.
Often artists draw character’s faces in two facial poses: mouth open or mouth closed. By adding teeth to Kirk on this page Shasteen has made him more intense. Q steals the book, though. He looks sensational throughout, with Pages 16 and 19 excellent.
I’m finding myself torn with the backgrounds. It’s fairly obvious that photographs are being used for several panels, such as aboard the Enterprise. Is Shasteen choosing his point of view based on what’s available, or does the art come first and a photo is dropped in? Is this a cheat for an artist?
Before the digital revolution artists would draw all of their backgrounds. I wince at some of the backgrounds in this issue because they stick out like poor bluescreen effects. This doesn’t happen all the time, but enough to get picked up on.
With Shasteen doing this, would his character work have suffered if he hadn’t used the pictures? A reader shouldn’t be noticing this or having such thoughts while reading a book.
There’s some impressive skin tone work on this issue from Davide Mastrolonardo. Faces in close-ups (Spock, Q, and Kirk) look particularly good. On board the Enterprise, backgrounds are pale blue and gray with the prerequisite lens flares. This puts the focus squarely on the characters, but had me wondering if it also wasn’t done to blur the photographs used.
The light effects, used for the characters’ eyes and what transpires on Pages 13, 14, 18, and 19, are great. Those background colors, though, just drew more focus to the photos.
Neil Uyetake has created narration and dialogue (the same font), sounds, a perfect whisper (Page 15), and the closing word.
All are fine, but I wanted the narration to be a different font from the dialogue as it’s an internal monologue — a different form of communication to the reader. If this were a novel, it would be in italics. A minor nick, but one nonetheless.
It’s been a tumultuous few weeks for Star Trek 3 — after Bob Orci was replaced with Fast & Furious director Justin Lin in December, fans began to question if co-writers JD Payne and Patrick McKay would remain on board the Enterprise for the upcoming 2016 film.
News has broken tonight that actor Simon Pegg — who has taken over the role of Chief Engineer Montgomery Scott in the new films — will be taking a stab at the Trek 3 script, alongside Bad Robot-contracted writer Doug Jung, who also created the TNT cable series Dark Blue.
Pegg has written or co-written several big-budget films, including The World’s End, Paul, Hot Fuzz, Shaun of the Dead, and several episodes of the critically-acclaimed British television series Spaced.
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We reached out to writers Payne and McKay earlier this week, after rumors began swirling around Pegg’s script involvement, but they declined to comment.
The entire sector is waiting to see what the newly reopened Bajoran wormhole will mean for the shifting political landscape in the Alpha Quadrant.
On Deep Space 9, Captain Ro Laren is suddenly drawn into the affairs of the People of the Open Sky, who have come to the station in search of sanctuary. Despite the opposition of the station’s security officer, Jefferson Blackmer, Ro Laren and Deep Space 9’s new CMO, Doctor Beverly Crusher, offer the People aid.
But when Dr. Crusher’s highly secure files are accessed without permission—the same files that hold the secrets of the Shedai, a race whose powerful but half-understood scientific secrets solved the Andorian catastrophe—the People seem the likeliest suspects.
As tensions rise on the station, the science vessel Athene Donald arrives as part of its journey of exploration. The brainchild of Doctor Katherine Pulaski, this ship is crewed by different species from the Khitomer Accords and the Typhon Pact.
Pulaski’s hope is that science will do what diplomacy has not: help the great powers put aside their hostilities and work together. But when the Athene Donald is summarily stopped in her voyage by the powerful vessel of a hitherto unknown species, Pulaski begins to wonder—will this first contact bring her crew together or tear them all apart?
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“I know,” Pulaski said with a laugh, “that I’m not the kind of person to attract confidences. So I appreciate your trust. I’ve always felt that because of that brief time I spent on the Enterprise that people … I don’t know … put us into competition somehow. Compare and contrast us. But I was always more than chief medical officer on the Enterprise.”
“I know exactly how you feel,” said Crusher.
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I have long been a fan of Una McCormack’s Star Trek work. The first of her novels that I read was the outstanding Deep Space Nine novel The Never-Ending Sacrifice. From that moment on, I was hooked. McCormack has a way of getting to the core of what a story is about, with redemption being one of her favorite topics, and The Missing is no exception.
There are a number of plotlines that make up the story of The Missing. First, the Olympic-class science vessel Athene Donald is embarking on a civilian mission of exploration. Aboard the Athene Donald is Katherine Pulaski, the one-time chief medical officer of the Enterprise-D, as well as one of the “co-conspirators” in devising a cure for the Andorian reproductive crisis. The mission of the vessel is to bring together various species in the spirit of peaceful cooperation in scientific endeavors.
At the same time, a ragtag fleet of starships arrives at Deep Space 9, populated by a group calling themselves the “People of the Open Sky.” Meanwhile, a Cardassian civilian petitions Odo to act on her behalf in repatriating her son, a prisoner of the Romulans since the end of the Dominion War, along with a number of other Cardassian POWs.
Una manages to stitch each of these stories together quite well, creating a “day in the life” feel on this new Deep Space 9, a feeling that has been missing for some time. In many ways, The Missing felt like an actual episode of DS9.
While I didn’t quite enjoy The Missing to the same extent I liked McCormack’s previous outings — including Hollow Men, The Never-Ending Sacrifice, Brinkmanship, or my favorite Trek novel of 2013, The Crimson Shadow —The Missing is still very well-written and engaging. With Una McCormack, I tend to set the bar very high, and even her weakest novel is still miles above most others!
Earlier, I mentioned that Una McCormack likes to deal with redemption in her novels. In The Missing, a highlight for me was the character of Peter Alden, a character that was first introduced in Brinkmanship. His character arc surprised me by being one of the great parts of this novel. His relationship with unwitting Tzenkethi defector Corazame (also from Brinkmanship) was a touchstone of the character work in The Missing.
The contrasting ideas of politics and conflict versus the ideals of exploration and discovery have been a central theme in Star Trek novels lately, and that contrast was played out very literally in the character of Peter Alden.
Final thoughts:
The Missing brings us back to Deep Space Nine in a way that made the series great. More than any other Star Trek series, the premise of DS9 allowed for “day-in-the-life” vignettes and on-going story arcs, and The Missing showcases those features expertly.
I very much enjoy Una McCormack’s writing, and I love that she feels free to experiment with different styles of narrative. For example, each chapter in The Missing begins with a personal log entry by Captain Picard, discussing various aspects of discovery and exploration. Each log entry set the tone for the chapter, bringing the story together in a fun and interesting way.
For this and many other reasons, The Missing was definitely a joy to read.
Back in 2013, we featured several exclusive cuts of deleted footage from episodes of Star Trek: The Next Generation – TrekCore’s features even inspired the research team at CBS to include high definition restorations of lost footage on the last several TNG Blu-ray releases – and now we’re back with a brand-new look into the classic Season 3 episode “Sins of the Father“!
This tape of “Sins of the Father” is dated February 5, 1990, and like the other VHS recordings in this series, it contains an early, unfinished copy of the episode, with missing visual effects, music, and voice-over audio.
In addition to several scenes featuring slightly different camera angles, this “Cut 4” also includes ten additional scenes cut from the broadcast version of the episode! We’ve been provided a copy of the original VHS transfer, and we’re happy to share an exclusive cut-down package highlighting the six most prominent deleted scenes – in proper context with the finished episode – along with a scene-by-scene breakdown!
TEASER, SCENES 03 – 04
Our take: This extended version of Kurn’s arrival to the Enterprise doesn’t add much to the overall plot of the episode, but it does serve to highlight the differences between Starfleet and Klingon command styles.
It also shows us why Kurn was so annoyed at Wesley’s delay to get the ship moving – he actually had to ask the Acting Ensign twice.
ACT TWO, SCENES 14 – 15
Our take: Another short addition to the show – Worf’s uncontrolled outburst towards Picard; Kurn proudly orders Wesley to take the Enterprise to Qo’nos, and the Acting Ensign swiftly complies.
It’s not much, but it’s nice to some emotional extensions to the scenes.
ACT TWO, SCENE 20
Our take: This scene is a very interesting one: it’s the viewer’s first visit to Qo’nos – the Klingon homeworld – and it’s obviously Riker and Picard’s first visit as well.
“There was a time when just being here would’ve meant a death sentence.”
That line, from writer Ronald D. Moore, is one that really calls back to the Klingon Empire of the Original Series – one at war with the Federation. It’s a reference that we would have loved to remain in the episode. It also gives explanation to why Riker beams down, does nothing, and then returns to the ship in the final cut.
The second part of the scene, where Worf tells Picard to head back to the ship when the proceedings get underway, also serve to explain why he and Riker seem to just disappear when things start heating up.
ACT THREE, SCENE 24
Our take: Picard and Riker beam back up to the ship. Again, this short cut was probably made for time’s sake, but it does fill in some continuity gaps.
ACT THREE, SCENES 36A – C
Our take: Now this footage is something that would have been a GREAT addition to the final episode. We learn that the Enterprise has been denied access to the Klingon planetary internet – on Duras’ orders – so Geordi decides to just hack the system!
It’s a funny bit of dialogue – in a fairly dark episode – and it shows a side of by-the-book La Forge that we almost never get to see. The Klingon “information net” comes into play later in the episode when the crew searches for Kahlest’s address in the First City.
ACT THREE, SCENE 37
Our take: An extension of Duras’ offer of protection to Kurn – promising to keep his relationship to Worf secret and offering up the command of a ship.
We can only imagine that these cuts were made for time – it’s pretty tempting offer, and it shows that Duras was willing to go to great lengths to turn Kurn against Worf.
ACT FOUR, SCENE 47
Our take: In this extension to Picard’s introduction as Cha’DIch, Duras puts out a lot of bluster to block him from assuming the role – until K’mpec shoots him down in front of the rest of the High Council.
He may be ready to fight, but he still respects the authority of the Chancellor.
ACT FIVE, SCENES 57 – 60
Our take: These added sections to Picard’s visit with Kahlest clear up some of the logistical questions about the Khitomer attack – Worf and Kahlest were separated from Mogh and Worf’s mother, so it explains a bit why they survived but Worf’s parents didn’t.
The cut-down section of their post-fight conversation was probably a good edit. Saying that K’mpec wanted to sleep with Kahlest lays his desires on a little thick, where “I caught his eye back then” works as a much more subtle bit of innuendo.
ACT FIVE, SCENES 61 – 63
Our take: This is a BIG cut: Kahlest actually announces Mogh’s innocence right on the floor of the High Council chambers! Instead of K’mpec and Duras just covering up her testimony, as seen in the final cut of the episode, this makes it look like the entire High Council – and observers of the court – work together to completely ignore her claims.
The second half also raises some interesting questions: how would Picard protect Kurn from the wrath of the High Council, should his relationship to Worf become public knowledge?
ACT FIVE, SCENE 64A
Our take: This brief conversation between Kurn and Worf feels like something that was cut to minimize the serialized nature of the Worf-vs-Duras storyline: Kurn predicts that Worf will one day return to beat the charges against him; Worf promises that Kurn will be standing with him on their day of victory.
It’s a lovely moment – and one that would have fit in perfectly with the final version of the episode – but it doesn’t work for a show that was struggling to stay as standalone as possible.
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In the meantime, we’re eager to hear your feedback about this newly-recovered footage cut from “Sins of the Father”, so tell us your thoughts in the comments below!It may have taken us a while, but our TNG workprint project is back in business — and yes, there’s still more to come!
On the Blu-rays, each cut sequence is featured in context with clips from the final episode, and we’ve got a full breakdown and analysis of the first scenes below.
Episode 7.07: “Dark Page”
Scenes 43 & 44: Deanna and Lwaxana flash back to Kestra’s death.
This brief snippet shows more of an overwhelmed Lwaxana and Ian Troi, bawling with grief. Not much here.
Episode 7.07: “Dark Page”
Scene 48: Lwaxana tells Deanna about her big sister, Kestra.
In a lovely extension of the final scene in Lwaxana’s quarters, the elder Troi describes how she worked to keep Kestra’s existence a secret, by asking Ian never to speak of their first daughter. Deanna also reports that she spoke to Mr. Homn, who sent a photo of Kestra to the Enterprise for Lwaxana to remember.
This conversation would have been nice to see in the final episode, and was likely removed for the sake of time. Lwaxana’s regret over her efforts to hide Kestra from the world really come through here, and her description of how loving Kestra was with the then-infant Deanna serves to add more depth to a character we barely see on-screen.
Episode 7.10: “Inheritance”
Scene 3: Juliana Tainer tells Data about his father, Noonien Soong.
Tainer gives Data an idea about how Soong worked to make his android creation as human as possible, describing a failed attempt to program Data with an occasional bought of hiccups.
It’s an amusing anecdote, imagining Data being distracted by hiccups, but the fact that the tale ends with Julianna convincing Soong to “forget it” leaves this as a fairly irrelevant bit of history.
Episode 7.10: “Inheritance”
Scene B8: Data looks to Counselor Troi for advise.
Data expresses his concern that Juliana’s interest in him seems to be “unlimited,” allowing Deanna to compare her affections to Data’s own attention spent on his deceased ‘daughter,’ Lal.
While it’s largely a duplication of material presented elsewhere in the episode, it does explain why Data tells Julianna he’s going to visit Troi — and then the episode just cuts to Data elsewhere on the ship. One wonders why the reference to visiting Troi was kept in the final cut of the episode.
Episode 7.10: “Inheritance”
Scene 15: Juliana talks about the powerful effects of guilt.
A minor extraction from their conversation in Ten Foward, Juliana begins to explain how guilty she felt for leaving Data behind on Omicron Theta — but she knows Data can’t understand the emotional impact guilt can have on someone.
It’s a tiny cut, and it really just serves to tighten up the dialogue in Ten Forward.
Episode 7.10: “Inheritance”
Scene 31: After their recital, Data’s friends congratulate the pair on their performance.
While Picard and Beverly express their praises to Juliana — where they “see where Data gets his musical talents” — Data gets an unexpectedly warm welcome-to-the-family sentiment from Pran Tainer, Juliana’s husband, who has expressed his anti-android preconceptions elsewhere in the episode.
These are some nice bits of character work, but their removal allows Data go right from the end of the performance directly to sickbay, where he tells Crusher of his suspicions about Juliana’s true identity.
Episode 7.11: “Parallels”
Scene 44: The senior staff discuss the implications of Data’s quantum reality theories.
As Data gives some examples of how things could be different in these alternate realities through which Worf has been shifting, Beverly tries to wrap her head around the thought that there are an infinite number of Dr. Crushers which could be having the exact same conversation.
Parallel universes were a relatively new concept to the general viewing audience when “Parallels” aired back in 1993, so it’s understandable why episode writer Brannon Braga wanted to include as much explanation in the script as possible — but the trim made here allows the discussion to move along quickly without “hand-holding” the audience through what’s happening on-screen.
Episode 7.14: “Sub Rosa”
Scene 1: Beverly eulogizes her beloved, deceased grandmother.
At Felisa Howard’s funeral, Beverly talks about her memories of her grandmother’s cooking, and that she was writing a cookbook when the passed away. She then proceeds to read, out loud, Felisa’s entire gingerbread recipe, which includes descriptions like “a happy oven” and “a welcoming pan.”
This may have been a good idea on paper, but watching Gates McFadden read an entire recipe, including metric measurements for each ingredient, seems to take forever and its removal makes the opening sequence pass by much more smoothly.
Episode 7.14: “Sub Rosa”
Scene 1: Beverly eulogizes her beloved, deceased grandmother.
At Felisa Howard’s funeral, Beverly talks about her memories of her grandmother’s cooking, and that she was writing a cookbook when the passed away. She then proceeds to read, out loud, Felisa’s entire gingerbread recipe, which includes descriptions like “a happy oven” and “a welcoming pan.”
This may have been a good idea on paper, but watching Gates McFadden read an entire recipe, including metric measurements for each ingredient, seems to take forever and its removal makes the opening sequence pass by much more smoothly.
Episode 7.14: “Sub Rosa”
Scene 19: Ned Quint tries to warn Beverly about the strange happenings on Caldos II.
Ned Quint, Felisa’s groundskeeper, warns Beverly about her childhood home being haunted by ghosts, and all the unexplainable things he’s seen around the colony.
This one’s a little much, and it’s hard not to roll our eyes at the actor who leans a little bit too deeply into a stereotypical spooky Scottish role, approaching Groundskeeper Willie territory. This one was cut for good reason.
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There’s plenty more to come, as we’ve still got eight more episodes worth of deleted scenes in Season 7 — stay tuned!
We’ve scoured the Internet, and with some help from some of our readers (including Simon of The Engage Podcast), we now have 52 of 80 syndication episode trailers for the remastered edition of Star Trek: The Original Series online at our YouTube channel!
These trailers aired in syndication with the remastered episodes from 2006 to 2009, and also appeared on iTunes as part of the official StarTrek.com podcast feed — but they were not included in either the 2007 HD-DVD release of TOS Season 1, or the 2009 Blu-ray release of the full series.
If you have any of the episode trailers listed below, please comment and let us know!
Our Trek Comics editor Patrick Hayes is back with a review of this month’s issue of IDW Publishing’s new Star Trek crossover comic series: the first chapter of “The Primate Directive,” where the Enterprise crew finds the Planet of the Apes!
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There are a whopping eight covers for you to hunt down! Good luck, humans!
The A cover is illustrated by interior artist and colorist Rachael Stott and Charlie Kirchoff. It’s a close-up of General Marius smiling as he holds up a shredded Starfleet captain’s tunic. This image was used a lot in promoting this book and deservedly so. A simple idea executed perfectly to show these two franchises have collided. Excellent detail in his face and love the contrasting orange background with the captain’s yellows.
Juan Ortiz, following up his excellent cover run on the recently completed Star Trek: Harlan Ellison’s The City on the Edge of Forever has created this cover featuring the classic image of the buried Statue of Liberty with a tiny Kirk beaming down before it. The lettering is set off by the grey, black, and white imagery. Excellent! I’m hoping that Ortiz does more covers for this series.
The subscription cover has an absolute insane amount of detail from George Perez’s pencils and Len O’Grady’s coloring. The Enterprise crew and Charlton Heston’s Taylor are cornered in a cave by an army of Klingons and apes. Kor is aiming his phaser at Taylor who’s responding in kind with his rifle. Naturally Kirk is fighting hand-to-hand with Marius. Gorgeous art and coloring.
Next up is the sketch cover. Rather than just the typical white space and title, this contains an image of the Enterprise firing upon a Klingon cruiser. I’m becoming a big fan of these sketch covers and love the extra bit under the title. I can’t give a blank cover a high grade, because it’s empty, but this is the cover I picked up.
Retailer incentive cover A is the same as the subscription cover, but without O’Grady’s contributions. This is a great way to see George Perez’s artwork in its original state. I’m glad IDW and BOOM! did this variant.
Shown as a teaser at this year’s San Diego Comic-Con is retailer incentive cover B, featuring art by Tone Rodriguez with colors by Kirchoff. This has Marius wearing a captain’s uniform while sitting in the captain’s chair. He snarls at readers, holding his wooden club. His bulk is too big for the uniform as it’s torn at his upper right arm. The coloring is good with the ship lit red for its status, making the yellow of the tunic pop.
The first retailer exclusive cover can be found at ThinkGeek.com. The art by John Midgley has the Starfleet delta rendered in a red outline on a black field. Within it is Marius glaring. Another simple idea made perfectly.
Stott provides the art and Kirchoff the colors on the second retailer Eexclusive, this one for NerdBlock.com. Kirk and Spock are on patrol in a forest, their phasers drawn for anything they encounter. If only they had looked up. Five gorilla soldiers are in the process of jumping down on them. I don’t like the coloring on the apes. The two closest look as though they’re white, while those in the far back are grey. Using blue as a background makes the apes and tree blob up against it.
Scott Tipton and David Tipton’s story begins in a ape structure, as a Klingon in shadows show General Marius a better rifle than “those wood-carved stone-throwers you’re used to firing.” The gorilla approves of the weapon but doesn’t know if he should trust the alien. “Why shouldn’t you? As long as you have the means to take control, does it matter from where the means come?” After firing a few test shots at the wall, Marius agrees. The Klingon raises his fist in joy. “With my help,” he says, “you’ll have this entire planet writhing beneath your heel. It’ll be glorious…”
Meanwhile at a Klingon communications post, Sulu and Uhura have been tasked with infiltration to see if the Federation’s foes have begun aggressive new conflicts. It was nice to see two supporting characters get some action off the Enterprise.
Back on their ship, the intel is revealed and the Enterprise is off to a new location. This new setting was interesting. However, there are four pages of discussion before proceeding further. This drawn out conversation is fine on film, but really seemed to drag. The final three pages have the crew going to the primary location of the mini-series. The ending is abrupt, closing only with visual contact of the inhabitants.
This is a foundation issue, introducing the reason why the two franchises can meet, but outside of the first three pages there’s no ape action. This is a Star Trek adventure only, so far. Next issue I’m wanting some ape interaction.
The visuals by Rachael Stott are very good. The second page focused on Marius and she’s done a really good job on his face and uniform. The action the general is doing in the third panel seems lifted right out of the films and his emotion in the fourth is excellent. I was very happy to see the Klingons of this book be the original series’ versions — no forehead bumps — hooray!
Also neat was the subtle augmentations done to Uhura and Sulu to walk among the Klingons. It was very reminiscent of Kirk in “The Enterprise Incident.” Stott is also adept at having the characters strike familiar poses, including Spock on Pages 9, 14, 15, and 19; Kirk on 11, 14, and 19; and McCoy on 15.
Her bridge is masterfully drawn. Her ships are also well done (Pages 8, 10, 12, 13, and 17), and the devices first shown on 10 outstanding. Based on what’s presented in this premiere issue, Stott is going to make this series look great.
Charlie Kirchoff also does good work on this issue. The meeting that occurs on the very first page happens in a darkened room, but Kirchoff smartly uses a pale violet (which is an excellent color to backlight the general’s dark colors) to denote the dark interior. The scenes in the Klingon base’s interiors are red to make them more tense, with the exteriors being cool blues and greens to calm readers into complicity.
The Enterprise has all the traditional colors one would expect, but the things it encounters in space are cinematically bright to suit their epic scale (Pages 10 – 13 and 17 – 18). Sound effects are also bright (Pages 7, 8, 11, and 12) making them strong.
Dialogue, sounds, scene settings, whispers, captain’s log, Klingon translations, a yell, and next issue’s tease come from Tom B. Long. I’m glad he created a specific font for Kirk’s log and I look forward to what how he’s going to present the apes’ cries.
When I was in my mid teens – and I’ll place the year at about 1987 – it was nothing for my best friend and I to tear apart the latest Star Trek: The Next Generation episode, scene by scene, and assign a final grade based not only on the writing and acting, but also, more importantly, on its directing.
Of course, we felt we were the only two people in the universe at the time doing this type of criticism. Trying to get my parents or sister to watch Star Trek and talk about it was like asking them to watch ice melt. As two guys subsisting almost daily on a diet of Trek, Blake’s 7, Red Dwarf, and Doctor Who, it was easy to think we were pretty alone in the world at the time. Outside of a couple online BBS’s, there weren’t really easy ways to connect with others like us.
Frakes directs Hallie Todd in “The Offspring.” (via Trek 365)
If you’re a young, sci-fi fan today, connecting isn’t much of a problem, relatively speaking, thanks to social media. And I must admit, despite the enormous age gulf now between me and them, I’m finding it pretty easy to spark spontaneous and sometimes accidental friendships with teens and early-20-somethings who are just as obsessive about directors and film composers as I once was, and still am. True armchair quarterbacks in the realm of cinema criticism – and shamelessly so.
I’m certainly not complaining about these welcome connections now but I often wonder if we’ve gotten to the point where we’re prejudging the prospects of a movie a little too much based solely on the choice of director. Of course those of us raised on Star Trek have good evidence for a solid defense of this obsession.
The choice of director has always been major point of discussion whenever a new Star Trek movie was announced. This is probably because Star Trek always allowed for a certain unorthodox transparency when it came to how it was put together. From The Next Generation’s open script submission policy to the voluminous production troves and behind-the-scenes dirt exposed for all to see in pre-Internet publications like Cinefantastique and others, Star Trek truly was an open-book.
William Shatner and Nick Meyer on the set of Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country.
My fixation was The Next Generation, and in the early 1990’s Cinefantastique magazine would put out a year-end edition looking back at the previous year’s episodes and production in a frightfully honest way. Where Starlog only scratched the surface, Cinefantastique drove the blade in deep. Writer Mark Altman’s episode reviews were frank and often harsh. You learned why certain writers, directors, and composers were chosen for certain episodes, and why some were asked never to come back.
So when a guy like David Carson was selected to direct the first Next Generation movie, production fans could understand why: he directed “Yesterday’s Enterprise,” one of the series’ finest episodes. The choice of Jonathan Frakes to direct the next two movies wasn’t altogether surprising either, given his success directing several episodes of the show (and producer Rick Berman’s proclivity for giving actors a shot at the Big Chair). These were comfort choices: fans knew their names and what they would bring to the table – similar to what Nicholas Meyer promised when he was brought back to direct The Undiscovered Country – the promise of a good movie.
The choice of Stuart Baird, a longtime Hollywood editor, to direct the tenth movie, Nemesis, was an interesting one. I wasn’t surprised that Berman and company went outside the box, but there was very little evidence to predict how well it would do in his hands. What I knew of Baird comes mostly from audio commentaries he did with director Richard Donner for The Omen and Superman, both of which he edited.
Patrick Stewart and Stuart Baird on the set of Star Trek: Nemesis.
My immediate impressions of Baird: he’s funny, articulate, and absolutely in love with filmmaking and film composing (his adoration for Jerry Goldsmith in The Omen is evident). Based on this, I was cautiously optimistic for Nemesis. Others no doubt felt alienated by this unfamiliar choice, and when the movie fizzled at the box office, it was easy to place blame somewhere.
Getting back to Nicholas Meyer: it comes as no surprise that his name had popped up again for the next Star Trek movie (along with Jonathan Frakes). Now largely separated from Star Trek, J.J. Abrams is leading his own herd of skeptics who have been watching his every move with the new Star Wars movie. As of writing this column, Fast and Furious director Justin Lin has been tapped to steer the next Star Trek movie, slated for release in 2016.
Perhaps there is some justification for banking on directors. Given the high cost of going to a movie and growing pressure from online streaming services, some kind of marquee name who can provide an assurance of quality is needed to bring people to the theaters, and actors and actresses just don’t seem to do it like they used to.
Bringing Bryan Singer back to helm the most recent X-Men movie no doubt put a lot of fans at ease when the news was announced. Singer, after all, launched the successful franchise in 2000. To be honest, the choice of Justin Lin has me scratching my head. On the surface, it seems to show more concern with maintaining its new-found mainstream popularity, which Abrams helped solidify, rather than a sign of respect for the history and integrity of franchise.
Vin Diesel and director Justin Lin on the set of Fast & Furious 6.
My point for this column is that we should keep an open mind when it comes to a left-field choice of director, but that’s certainly hard to do when it comes to Star Trek, which every fan feels he or she has some stock in. And that’s not just among us seasoned viewers.
Even young fans seem to have been christened at birth with a heightened cinematic awareness and understanding of what works and what doesn’t when it come to producing a genre movie. One wonders if any movie produced today can ever meet these inevitable lofty, collective expectations facing it.
As we close out the year, we wanted to check in and see what progress has been made so far in the three months since the Enterprise left Washington — and who’s been brought on board to assist with the preservation.
TREKCORE: What can you tell us about how things have progressed on the Enterprise project since we spoke back in September?
DR. MARGARET WEITEKAMP: Well, as you know, we were able to take the model off display and have moved it to the Steven F. Udvar-Hazy Center where we have our Emil Buehler Conservation Laboratory.
That has really given our chief curator time to really get a very close look at the model and has allowed us to really narrow in on issues of paint, issues of structure, and to start planning in which directions our conservation efforts are going to go.
We really are thinking of this as conservation of – as of this week – a fifty-year old object. December 29th was fiftieth anniversary of its delivery to Desilu back in 1964, and it’s a particularly opportune moment to come back to the physical model and to think about it very specifically.
The museum has been doing its own work and evaluation which has included using UV light to analyze the paint, and to figure out where we have clearly repainted areas and where we have areas that seem to be more uniform in their paint. The top of the saucer section, for example, leads us to believe that it is original paint – it all fluoresces in the same way.
So we’ve been doing our internal work on that, which has also included some X-rays done in cooperation with the National Zoological Park. They were kind enough to send two of their veterinary radiography technicians over to the Museum and we were able to do X-rays of the saucer section – but we’re still waiting on getting those files from the zoo.
We’re hoping that the X-ray team might be able to come back in January and take a look at the rest of the Enterprise model’s structure. It turns out that it takes quite a long time to very carefully set up each of those X-ray shots, so getting complete X-rays of the saucer took the better part of the time they were with us.
Ultraviolet photography of the top of the Enterprise saucer; the original paint has started to show signs of “traction cracking” caused by shrinkage due to the age of the model. Courtesy of the Smithsonian’s National Air & Space Museum.
TREKCORE: Did you call them in because of the size of the model required specialized equipment, or was just because of their expertise?
WEITEKAMP: We used them because they are also part of the Smithsonian. We’re taking advantage of our internal resources, because their X-ray equipment is not a device that the National Air & Space Museum normally has on hand – but it’s something one of our conservators knew our colleagues had and would be able to use.
The Enterprise has been X-rayed before, but that was done by sending it out for analysis. This is an opportunity – since the Zoological Park team had a portable radiography unit – to bring the equipment in house and save us the trouble of having to move the model an additional time.
It was really interesting. You can get a good sense of the interior; all of the little penny nails and things like that. I’m excited to get some of that imagery back. It comes in very large files that are specific to the scanning system that they have; they are in the process of converting them to a more standardized image file that we can use when working with the model.
One of our photographers is excited to be able to knit those X-rays together to give us some large-scale swaths of the structure all in one view. That’s something that’s pending and that we’ll have available to us down the road.
TREKCORE: Have you been able to pull in members of the Star Trek production team, or other consultants to assist with the project? Last time we spoke you were still in the early stages of contacting people to help.
WEITEKAMP: We’ve pulled together a volunteer special advisory committee of what are basically Enterprise experts. They’re a group of people from all across the industry – we’ve been able to have a significant email correspondence, as well as a giant video conference where we could all talk about what some of the issues are with the model based on their experience.
The Smithsonian’s “Enterprise experts” include such Trek mainstays as Andy Probert, Rick Sternbach, Mike and Denise Okuda, and Doug Drexler.
The Museum is trying to assemble as much information as we can to really create a detailed list of issues that we want to address in terms of structural stabilization, cleaning, paint issues, display concerns, decal artwork, and things like that.
We’re really trying to create a comprehensive list before we do any actual work so we’re able to plan as much as we can ahead of time.
TREKCORE: Do you have any plans for that team to be involved with the actual preservation work, or do you expect them to serve more in an advisory capacity only?
WEITEKAMP: Well, we are still making plan on how that’s going to work. John Goodson from ILM was in the area over the holidays, so I was able to take him to see the model and we had a very good discussion standing next to it.
My hope is, in the spring, that I’ll be able to bring the advisory committee to the Museum to have an in-person meeting allow them a chance to look at the model closely. That will allow them to advise the Museum on how we should plan out the actual work that needs to be done.
The consulting team also includes John Van Citters, Vice President for Product Development at CBS Consumer Products, ILM modelmaker and digital artist John Goodson, Star Trek studio model collector Adam Schneider, and Enterprise model expert Gary Kerr.
We have not made final decisions of exactly how all that is going to work, but I’m really delighted that these folks were willing to lend their expertise to this project, because as much as we have deep information about the model, these professionals have a lot of practical, hands-on knowledge this type of models.
It’s such a wonderful resource and we’re very grateful for their willingness and their enthusiasm.
TREKCORE: When we spoke in September, you had mentioned a concern with not just the paint, but the structural sagging affecting parts of the model. Was there anything specific that has jumped out as an immediate concern for your to-do list?
WEITEKAMP: Well, before the model came off display, we could see the two nacelles were starting to sag and spread apart slightly.
From talking with the advisory committee, I heard from a few of them that issue is a common problem with the Enterprise design. They’ve seen the sagging in other studio models, in commercial model kits, in consumer products created in the Enterprise design…
The charm of the Enterprise design is that it instantly looks like it wouldn’t well in gravity. It looks like something that needs to float in a weightless environment. The trick, then, is having a model built of wood, plastic, and little bits of metal, exist in fifty years of Earth gravity!
We’re hopeful that if we can get a good look at how the nacelle pieces are joined to the main body of the ship, we may be able to stabilize them without having to add external supports to the display. It’s been nice that the model has been able to be displayed in a very similar form to the way it was used initially; for a long time, the Museum hung it from a central point.
From the year 2000, it had been displayed on a stand at the central part of the hull, giving it that same kind of ‘floating’ look – but we’re going to have to make some decisions about the best ways to support the model, now that it’s fifty years old.
Again, we still haven’t made a decision about exactly how we’re going do to that. I want to get a better look at the joints that hold the nacelles on and think about the long-term health of the model in terms of a display plan.
X-ray photography from a prior Enterprise preservation project. Courtesy of the Smithsonian’s National Air & Space Museum.
TREKCORE: And the secondary X-ray passes are going to help with some of that decision-making process?
WEITEKAMP: I think it will, yes. I know that those joints are something that members of the advisory committee – when I asked them to recommend a spot on the model where they wanted to see X-rays – they were adamant to see the two joints where the nacelles go into the main hull of the ship, and how that whole area is constructed.
TREKCORE: We’ve seen some of the old X-ray photos from an earlier analysis, and they could definitely use an upgrade.
WEITEKAMP: The technology has really improved in the last fifteen years or so since those X-rays were done. The X-rays that we’re getting now are so sensitive that in some shots, we can actually see the grain in the wood!
TREKCORE: Oh, wow!
WEITEKAMP: Yeah, it’s a much more detailed and granular look at the construction, and I think that it will really help a lot. We want to be minimally invasive as we possibly can when we work with the model.
TREKCORE: Well, from what you’ve said, that’s probably as much as you’re able to share, being so early in the process…
WEITEKAMP: It really is, and it’s going to be some time before show the public these new X-rays; I’m just as eager to see the images myself!
We were very gratified that to have such support from the National Zoological Park. The folks who were doing the scans lent us not just the technology, but also a lot of expertise on the best way to set things up to get the best images.
At one point, we could see them looking the model over and thinking hard, and we asked them what they were doing. They said, “Well, we’re trying to figure out the relative density of the saucer of this model, compared to what we know about the density of animal flesh!”
They were doing some mental calculations to set up the equipment properly, and they really nailed it! We got very sharp pictures of the model, and I’m excited. It’s going to help us quite a bit, but it will be a few months before we get that processed for our use.
The Enterprise model in its former home in the underground gift shop. Courtesy of the Smithsonian’s National Air & Space Museum.
TREKCORE: It’s really very interesting, all the work you and your team are going. We know that the fans are glad that this review of the model seems to be above and beyond the prior projects, though perhaps it’s just the technology that’s improved so much since the last time around.
WEITEKAMP: The technology has improved, and I get to stand on the shoulders of giants. I get to base what I’m doing on what my colleagues have done on the previous versions of this project.
With new technology, new expertise, and new thoughts about what the conservation techniques can be, I expect that the next curator to take on the Enterprise will do even better than I do today, because the technology will continue to improve.
Hopefully they will be able to base whatever they may do for the Enterprise in twenty years on what we do today. It’s not so much that we are ‘better’ than the folks that have come before, but it’s having the additional resources available to us, and the ability to lean on our predecessors’ work as a starting point.
TREKCORE: Well, if this project works out well, the Enterprise won’t need to be revisited again for at least a few more curators!
WEITEKAMP: [Laughs] I sure hope so, that’s my goal!
Dr. Margaret A. Weitekamp curates the Air and Space Museum’s social and cultural dimensions of spaceflight collection, more than 4,000 artifacts that include space memorabilia and space science fiction objects.
These everyday mementos of the space age – which include toys and games, clothing and stamps, medals and awards, buttons and pins, as well as comics and trading cards – complete the story about spaceflight told by the Museum’s collection of space hardware and technologies.
If you’re in the Virginia area on January 24, Dr. Weitekamp and the Enterprise model will be participating in an open house event at the Udvar-Hazy Center, open to the general public.